1 I'll always remember you. 2016-02-25 2 Chocolate's truth?? 2016-02-18 3 The thing which makes humans different from robots 2015-07-08 4 My favorite character! 2015-07-04 5 The poem that I wrote a year ago 2015-07-02 6 Animals 2015-06-10 7 I think... 2014-08-05 8 Vacation? 2014-07-29 9 Final? 2014-06-24 10 Meditation 2014-06-17 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10   회 원 고혜정 작성일 2013-09-13 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 Have a good weekend! 내 용 1. What will robots be able to work for people? 2. What kind of robots do you want to make? Why? 3. Do you want to buy a robot that can help you? Why or why not? Robots are in our livings. Microwaves are robots. Computers that we use to watch those articles and my diaries are robots. Now we cannot live properly when there are no robots. In future, there will be robots shaped like humans and act like humans. When I was young, I sometimes thought making a robot for my mom. A houseworking robot. And I thought about making robot for myself when I become an adult. Because if I become a mathematicion, then I will be very busy, so I need someone to help my housework. But if I cannot employee someone for me, than I have to make a robot. If I cannot make that robot, than I have to buy a robot. Like I said little bit ago, a robot for my housework. Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me. Have a good weekend and see you on Monday! Annie. 답변자 tc0069 답변일 2013-09-16 답변내용 Happy Monday, Annie!^^* Did you have a great weekend? I'm so excited to hear your stories.^^* Anyway, I hope people will not depend on robots in the future. Let's still try our best in everything we do. I'll see you tonight in class, Annie!*^_^* -=CORRECTIONS=- Robots are in our livings. = Robots are living with us. (correct usage of expressions) Microwaves are robots. = Good! Computers that we use to watch those articles and my diaries are robots. = Computers that we use to see the articles and my diaries are robots. (correct usage: verb / determiner) Now we cannot live properly when there are no robots. = Now, we cannot live without robots. (add a punctuation mark; correct usage of expressions) In future, there will be robots shaped like humans and act like humans. = In the future, there will be robots shaped like humans and act like humans. (add a determiner) When I was young, I sometimes thought making a robot for my mom. = When I was young, I thought of making a robot for my mom. (add a preposition) A houseworking robot. = It is a houseworking robot. (add a pronoun) And I thought about making robot for myself when I become an adult. = And I thought of making a robot for myself when I become an adult. (add a preposition) Because if I become a mathematicion, then I will be very busy, so I need someone to help my housework. = Because if I become a mathematician, I will be very busy, so I need someone who will help me do my work. (correct usage of expressions; correct spelling: mathematicion = mathematician) But if I cannot employee someone for me, than I have to make a robot. = But if I cannot hire someone to help me, I have to make a robot. (correct usage of expressions) If I cannot make that robot, than I have to buy a robot. = And if I cannot make a robot, I have to buy one. (correct usage of expressions) Like I said little bit ago, a robot for my housework. = Like what I have said awhile ago, I will buy a robot that can do some housework. (correct usage of expressions) Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me. = You're always welcome!^^* Have a good weekend and see you on Monday! = Thank you and see you in class!^^* Have a nice day, Annie!^^*