1 I'll always remember you. 2016-02-25 2 Chocolate's truth?? 2016-02-18 3 The thing which makes humans different from robots 2015-07-08 4 My favorite character! 2015-07-04 5 The poem that I wrote a year ago 2015-07-02 6 Animals 2015-06-10 7 I think... 2014-08-05 8 Vacation? 2014-07-29 9 Final? 2014-06-24 10 Meditation 2014-06-17 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10   회 원 고혜정 작성일 2013-10-02 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My birthday is coming soon@@ 내 용 1. Do you think humans will live on Mars? Why or why not? 2. What is the most important thing to become an astronaut? Why? 3. When did humans first land on the moon? In 1969, humans landed on the moon for the first time. The astronaut who landed on the moon was Neil Alden Armstrong. After that, humans went to the universe very much. And now, scientists think that humans can live on Mars because there is an ice, and that means we can make water. So if we can make Mars little bit warmer, and make atmosphere like the Earth, humans can also live in Mars. So nowadays, astronauts are very important for our living. Several decades later, humans cannot live on Earth because there will be no more land to live. So scientists are trying to make another planet just like the Earth. But everyone cannot become an astronaut. They have to have very good eyesights, and they have to be tall - taller than 152 cm, shorter than 193 cm. And some more, but I'll not write them all in this diary. But all of these qualifications are very important. Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me tonight! See you tomorrow! Annie. 답변자 tc0018 답변일 2013-10-03 답변내용 ** NOTE: Please check the corrections below especially the punctuations. ^^V In 1969, humans landed on the moon for the first time. The astronaut who landed on the moon was Neil Alden Armstrong. >> In 1969, humans landed on the moon for the first time. The astronaut who landed on the moon was Neil Alden Armstrong. After that, humans went to the universe very much. >> (What do you mean by went to the universe very much?^^V) And now, scientists think that humans can live on Mars because there is an ice, and that means we can make water. So if we can make Mars little bit warmer, and make atmosphere like the Earth, humans can also live in Mars. >> No, scientists think that humans can live on Mars because there is ice and that means there is water. If we can make Mars a little bit warmer and make it similar to the Earth's atmosphere, humans can also live in Mars. So nowadays, astronauts are very important for our living. Several decades later, humans cannot live on Earth because there will be no more land to live. So scientists are trying to make another planet just like the Earth. But everyone cannot become an astronaut. >> Nowadays, astronauts are very important. Several decades later, humans cannot live on Earth because there will be no more land to live. So, the scientists are trying to study if we can live in another planet. Not everyone can become an astronaut. They have to have very good eyesights, and they have to be tall - taller than 152 cm, shorter than 193 cm. And some more, but I'll not write them all in this diary. But all of these qualifications are very important. >> They have to have very good eyesight and they have to be tall - taller than 152 cm, shorter than 193 cm. There are more qualitications but I'll not write them in this diary. All of the qualifications are very important. -------------------------------------- Hi Annie! Thanks for writing on your diary. ^^ Oh! When is you birthday? What are you going to do for your birthday? Tell me about it! ^^ Always, T. Charm