1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-10-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Test finished 내 용 Today, finally the test was finished. I was happy. I played games for the 15 hours. I was too tired that I couldm't write my diary. Whatever, I was too tired. I slept at 5a.m in the morning an playedgame again at 10 a.m.I was seriously tired. Actually I must be blamed y mom, but My mom went to the grandmother's house without me. That's why I just could play games as much as I want. 'Faked By Mom' which is my nickname for the game league of legend. became the legend. I did 16 kills who damaged enemy the most, and 4 death which was the least. But its too sad that I'm much worse than my cousin. Whatever, I was the best for that time. What a exciting, and my mom doesn't know that I totally ruined my test! Because I didn't try my best. If I tried , I would get 100 in every subjest eventhough it is a alien words. You know why? It's because I made this world and I'm the god who should be respected by everyone. That's why you should respect me. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-10-07 답변내용 Today, finally the test was finished. [Correct!] I was happy. [Correct!] I played games for the 15 hours. I played games [for 15] hours. I was too tired that I couldm't write my diary. [Correct!] Whatever, I was too tired. [Correct!] I slept at 5a.m in the morning an playedgame again at 10 a.m. I slept at [five o'clock] in the morning [and played games] again at [ten o'clock in the morning.] I was seriously tired. [Correct!] Actually I must be blamed y mom, but My mom went to the grandmother's house without me. [Actually,] I must [blame my] mom, but [my] mom went [to grandmother's] house without me. That's why I just could play games as much as I want. That's why [I could] play games as much as I want. 'Faked By Mom' which is my nickname for the game league of legend. 'Faked By [Mom' is] my nickname for the game [League] of [Legends.] became the legend. [I] became the legend. I did 16 kills who damaged enemy the most, and 4 death which was the least. I did 16 kills who damaged [the] enemy the [most and had] 4 [deaths] which was the least. But its too sad that I'm much worse than my cousin. [However, it is] too sad that I'm much worse than my cousin. Whatever, I was the best for that time. Whatever, I was the best [at] that time. What a exciting, and my mom doesn't know that I totally ruined my test! [It was exciting and] my mom doesn't know that I totally ruined my test! Because I didn't try my best. [It is because] I didn't try my best. If I tried , I would get 100 in every subjest eventhough it is a alien words. If I tried , I would get 100 in every [subject even though] it [is alien] words. You know why? [Correct!] It's because I made this world and I'm the god who should be respected by everyone. [Correct!] That's why you should respect me. [Correct!] Notes: 1. Please focus on how to write times properly. 2. Always remember to use capital letters to start a proper noun. 3. Observe proper word choices. Hi Stiven! Thank you for writing! ^^ - Teacher Tracy