1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-10-15 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Who am I 내 용 Today, my mom got extremely mad at me. I don't know why but it was seriously scary. I didn't do anything wrong. I don't know why but my mom was really mad.I couldn't do anything, My mother ordered me to think about who am I so I'm going to talk about it. First, I'm just a normal studet(Sometimes God), and who is extremely smart. I think I'm one of the smartest in my class. For other side, I play games everyday. I play with my friends and if my friends do not play well, He will be dead in school by tommorow. Whatever, I have a lot of sides whitch I can't count. I can become a God:-).I can become a boy who is extremely smart. I can even become a boy who plays game every day and violent(?). It's just the thing that I can think of who I am. I'm not sure what my mom will say about this. k ㅇㅅㅇ 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-10-16 답변내용 Today, my mom got extremely mad at me. [Correct!] I don't know why but it was seriously scary. [Correct!] I didn't do anything wrong. [Correct!] I don't know why but my mom was really mad. I [didn't] know why but my mom was really mad. I couldn't do anything, I couldn't do [anything.] My mother ordered me to think about who am I so I'm going to talk about it. My mother ordered me to think about who [I am] so I'm going to talk about it. First, I'm just a normal studet(Sometimes God), and who is extremely smart. First, I'm just a normal [student (sometimes God) who] is extremely smart. I think I'm one of the smartest in my class. [Correct!] For other side, I play games everyday. [On the other hand,] I play games everyday. I play with my friends and if my friends do not play well, He will be dead in school by tommorow. I play with my friends and if my friends do not play well, [he] will be dead in school by tommorow. Whatever, I have a lot of sides whitch I can't count. Whatever, I have a lot of sides [which] I can't count. I can become a God:-). [Correct!] I can become a boy who is extremely smart. [Correct!] I can even become a boy who plays game every day and violent(?). I can even become a boy who plays [games everyday] and violent(?). It's just the thing that I can think of who I am. [Correct!] I'm not sure what my mom will say about this. k ㅇㅅㅇ [Correct!] Notes: 1. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 2. Observe proper word choices. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing. ^^ - Teacher Tracy