1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-10-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Pop song contest 내 용 Today, we did the popsong contest. We failed. I didn't feel bad because I just played while others practice. we did good time of Carly Rae Japsen and Owl city. It was a good song, but I was too tired of practicig the dance and song. So even I was in the first row of the dance part, I became extremely lay and did really bad. I think I became the worst man in singing a popsong in my school. I think It would be better if we do other song. I think this was not funny. Boys were not excited about songs and most of my friends didn't knew the lyrics. k. I think I don't want to have this kind of festival anymore. What the h*** 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-10-22 답변내용 Today, we did the popsong contest. Today, we did the [pop song] contest. We failed. [Correct!] I didn't feel bad because I just played while others practice. I didn't feel bad because I just played while others [practiced.] we did good time of Carly Rae Japsen and Owl city. We did ["Good Time"] of Carly Rae [Jepsen] and Owl [City.] It was a good song, but I was too tired of practicig the dance and song. It was a good song, but I was too tired of [practicing] the dance and song. So even I was in the first row of the dance part, I became extremely lay and did really bad. [So,] even [if] I was in the first row of the dance part, I became extremely [lazy] and did really bad. I think I became the worst man in singing a popsong in my school. I think I became [the worst] man in singing a [pop song] in my school. I think It would be better if we do other song. I think [it] would [have been] better if we [did another] song. I think this was not funny. [Correct!] Boys were not excited about songs and most of my friends didn't knew the lyrics. k. [The boys] were not excited about [the song] and most of my friends didn't [know the lyrics.] I think I don't want to have this kind of festival anymore. [Correct!] What the h*** What the [h***?!] Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Please focus on the proper use of articles. Hi Stiven! Maybe your class did not win because you and some of your classmates did not do your best. Try to participate better next time. Always do your best in whatever you do. - Teacher Tracy