1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-10-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Festival 내 용 Today, there was a festival. I think it was really boring. I didn't do almost everything. Ijust stayed in my classroom and watched other groups performance. and I just watched movie. I think it was kind of terrible. and also, lunch was not that delicious. I thought the lunch would be so delicious that I won'thave to eat breakfast. However it was extremely bad. I couldn't eat fish! It was so bitter.In the afternoon, We did a tug of war. Our class has lost in 30seconds. we actually didn't do anything. We even passed our row to other classes so that they could win over us. and we watche movie named Hiding. It was kind of scary. The summury is one person is living secretly in other person's house, but that person dies by fire. Whatever, It was horrible to hear 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-10-31 답변내용 Today, there was a festival. [Correct!] I think it was really boring. [Correct!] I didn't do almost everything. I [almost did not do anything.] Ijust stayed in my classroom and watched other groups performance. and I just watched movie. [I just stayed in my classroom and watched other [groups' performances and] I just watched [a] movie. I think it was kind of terrible. and also, lunch was not that delicious. I think it was kind of [terrible and] also, [the] lunch was not that delicious. I thought the lunch would be so delicious that I won'thave to eat breakfast. I thought the lunch would be so delicious that I [would not have] to eat breakfast. However it was extremely bad. [However,] it was extremely bad. I couldn't eat fish! [Correct!] It was so bitter. [Correct!] In the afternoon, We did a tug of war. In the [afternoon, we did tug] of war. Our class has lost in 30seconds. Our [class lost ]in [30 seconds. ] we actually didn't do anything. [We] actually didn't do anything. We even passed our row to other classes so that they could win over us. and we watche movie named Hiding. We even passed our [rope] to other classes so that they could win over [us and] we [watched a movie] named ["Hiding."] It was kind of scary. [Correct!] The summury is one person is living secretly in other person's house, but that person dies by fire. The [summary] is one person is living secretly in other person's house, but that person dies [because of] fire. Whatever, It was horrible to hear Whatever, [it] was horrible to [hear.] Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Be careful in capitalizing words. 3. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing! ^^ - Teacher Tracy