1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-11-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Storm'HiYen' 내 용 There was such a big storm in phillipines. I think Korean was so lucky that We didn't get storm. I think if it hit our country, a lot of people would be dead.Even in onr phillipine's region called 'Tacloma(?)' was destroyed by storm and over 1,0000 people died and Also 40 Korean died or out of contact. Now, I've heard that It also hit vietnam and China. I hope there was not big problem. I think storms should be disappeard. I really hate them, because it rains too much and We can not go out side because our parents worry!! I really hate them. What a poor philipines, I hope god will bless them and their poor lives so that Phillipines could be free from the nightmare which is called as HiYen!! Whay a poor countries I'll donate alot for you guys kkk What a poor! gus and II really envy iy!qqqe 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-11-12 답변내용 There was such a big storm in phillipines. There was such a big storm in [the Philippines.] I think Korean was so lucky that We didn't get storm. I think [Koreans were] so lucky that [we] didn't get [hit by the] storm. I think if it hit our country, a lot of people would be dead. [Correct!] Even in onr phillipine's region called 'Tacloma(?)' was destroyed by storm and over 1,0000 people died and Also 40 Korean died or out of contact. [A region in the Philippines] called 'Tacloma(?)' was destroyed by [the] storm and over 1,0000 people [died. Also,] 40 [Koreans] died [and some are still missing.] Now, I've heard that It also hit vietnam and China. Now, I've heard that [it] also hit [Vietnam] and China. I hope there was not big problem. I hope there was not [a] big problem. I think storms should be disappeard. I think storms should [disappear.] I really hate them, because it rains too much and We can not go out side because our parents worry!! I really hate [them because] it rains too much and [we] can not go [outside] because our parents [will] worry!! I really hate them. [Correct!] What a poor philipines, I hope god will bless them and their poor lives so that Phillipines could be free from the nightmare which is called as HiYen!! [Poor Philippines. I] hope [God] will bless them and their poor lives so that [the Philippines] could be free from the nightmare [called Haiyan!] Whay a poor countries I'll donate alot for you guys kkk [Why poor [countries?] I'll donate [a lot for you guys.] What a poor! What a [pity!] gus and II really envy iy!qqqe * What do you mean by this sentence? Notes: 1. Observe proper word choices. 2. Be careful with your spelling. 3. Always remember to use capital letters to start a proper noun. 4. Please focus on the proper use of articles and prepositions. 5. Please study more on different sentence patterns and grammatical structures. Hi Stiven! Thank you for writing. The city is called Tacloban. ^^ - Teacher Tracy