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And I finish it at twelve o’clock, when I do all of it I can read some books. I’ll eat lunch at twelve. It’s twelve thirty, I’ll do a study and homework for thirty minutes. And I play at outside such as play at playground or riding a bike, board at the side of the river. I’m very good at playtime. It’s very funny and can do exercise. I’ll play two hours. When I go to home and wash my face. Then I’ll do homework that don’t all do at morning. I’ll do homework for three ours. It’s very hard. At six I’ll eat dinner with all family. Stay with family is very good. At seven do little study and read books. And play card games and so on. At eight pm listing a story English and I write a diary. I like to read books all night. And I falling in sleep. The plans get change to such as go trip go liberally and so on. My vacation 1. Get a rest. I want to getsome rest in my vacation. It is because I can’t sleep well in my life. I can sleep 7hours. Many is 8hours. 2. Go to musuems I want to go musuems. It is because I want know many things and experience something. Such as history, sience, art and so on… 3. Play with my friends I want to plays with my friends. I can’t play with myfriends. Because my time is not right our friends. Thus, I want to play with my friends. 4. Pajama party I want to go my friends house and do pajama party. I want to play with my friends and study toghether. With my best friends. 5. Study English well I do my English study well. I want to fill shortage. 6. Sudy math well I go math academy. This time I study mah 2:30. I study hard and I want to get some good grade about my test. 7. Ice- Rink I want to go Mokdong Ice-Rink with my familly. This time I want to ride a skate with my mom. My mom don’t ride this. She don’t like sports now. 8. Prepare new grade I prepare new grade. It is because next year I’m 6 grade. Thus,I prepare my new grade. 답변자 tc0092 답변일 2013-12-13 답변내용 My winter vacation plans. >> no correction ^^ It’s December and it’s winter. >> no correction ^^ And the vacation is coming soon. >> The vacation is coming soon, too. We need a plan at the vacation and do plans. >> We need to plan for the vacation and we have to follow our plans. I want to make a plans on vacation now. >> I want to make plans for the vacation now. My vacation plan. >> no correction ^^ Seven am: I wake up and read some books. >> Seven am: I will wake up and read some books. Eight am: eat breakfast with my family. >> Eight am: I will eat breakfast with my family. Now that day’s is starting. >> I've already started this plan today. When I eat breakfast maybe it’s eight thirty. >> I think it was 8:30 when I ate my breakfast. After I eat breakfast now I will do a study or homework. >> After eating breakfast, I will do my homework and study. Such as English, math, listing a English books and so on. >> I will study English, Math, and so on. I will also listen to English lessons. And I finish it at twelve o’clock, when I do all of it I can read some books. >> I will finish all of these by 12:00. After I finish them, I can read some books. I’ll eat lunch at twelve. >> no correction ^^ It’s twelve thirty, I’ll do a study and homework for thirty minutes. >> It's twelve thirty! I'll study and do some of my homework for 30 minutes. And I play at outside such as play at playground or riding a bike, board at the side of the river. >> I will play outside. I will play at the playground, ride a bike, and use my board at the side of the river. I’m very good at playtime. >> I'm very good at playing. It’s very funny and can do exercise. >> It's very fun and we can exercise, too. I’ll play two hours. >> I'll play for two hours. When I go to home and wash my face. >> When I go home, I'll wash my face. Then I’ll do homework that don’t all do at morning. >> Then, I'll do my homework, whcih I was not able to finish in the morning. I’ll do homework for three ours. >> I'll do my homework for three hours. It’s very hard. >> no correction ^^ At six I’ll eat dinner with all family. >> At six, I'll eat dinner with my family. Stay with family is very good. >> Staying with my family is very good. At seven do little study and read books. >> At seven, I'll study a little and read some books. And play card games and so on. >> Then, I will play card games and so on. At eight pm listing a story English and I write a diary. >> At eight pm, I will listen to an English story and then I'll write a diary. I like to read books all night. >> no correction ^^ And I falling in sleep. >> Then, I'll fall asleep. The plans get change to such as go trip go liberally and so on. >> The plans can be changed if there would be unexpected plans, like going on a trip, going to the library, and so on. My vacation >> no correction ^^ 1. Get a rest. >> no correction ^^ I want to getsome rest in my vacation. >> I want to get some rest during my vacation. It is because I can’t sleep well in my life. >> It is because I can't sleep well most of the time. I can sleep 7hours. Many is 8hours. >> I usually sleep for 7 hours. 8 hours is the most. 2. Go to musuems >> no correction ^^ I want to go musuems. >> I wnat to go to museums. It is because I want know many things and experience something. Such as history, sience, art and so on… >> It is because I want to know many things and experience a lot of things, such as history, sience, arts and so on… 3. Play with my friends >> no correction ^^ I want to plays with my friends. >> I want to play with my friends. I can’t play with my friends. >> no correction ^^ Because my time is not right our friends. >> It is because my schedule doesn't fit well with my friends'. Thus, I want to play with my friends. >> no correction ^^ 4. Pajama party >> no correction ^^ I want to go my friends house and do pajama party. >> I want to go to my friend's house and have a pajama party. I want to play with my friends and study toghether. >> I want to play with my friends and study with them. With my best friends. >> I want to be with my best friends. 5. Study English well >> no correction ^^ I do my English study well. >> I will study English very well. I want to fill shortage. >> I want to improve my skills. 6. Sudy math well >> no correction ^^ I go math academy. >> I will go to a Math academy. This time I study mah 2:30. >> This time, I will study Math at 2:30. I study hard and I want to get some good grade about my test. >> I will study hard and I want to get good grades on my test. 7. Ice- Rink >> no correction ^^ I want to go Mokdong Ice-Rink with my familly. >> I want to go to Mokdong Ice-Rink with my family. This time I want to ride a skate with my mom. >> This time, I want to go skating with my mom. My mom don’t ride this. >> My mom doesn't skate. She don’t like sports now. >> She doesn't like sports now. 8. Prepare new grade >> no correction ^^ I prepare new grade. >> I will prepare for my new level. It is because next year I’m 6 grade. >> It is because next year, I will become a 6th grader. Thus,I prepare my new grade. >> Thus, I will prepare for my new level.