1 I'll always remember you. 2016-02-25 2 Chocolate's truth?? 2016-02-18 3 The thing which makes humans different from robots 2015-07-08 4 My favorite character! 2015-07-04 5 The poem that I wrote a year ago 2015-07-02 6 Animals 2015-06-10 7 I think... 2014-08-05 8 Vacation? 2014-07-29 9 Final? 2014-06-24 10 Meditation 2014-06-17 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10   회 원 고혜정 작성일 2014-01-06 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Miracle in Cell No.7 내 용 <Miracle in Cell No.7> On March 1st, my mother said to me like this. "Let's go to a theater and watch a movie." I refused to go, because I don't like watching movies, but I had to go. The movie was very touching. In the end of the movie, I was crying with the actress on the screen. My parents, and other viewers were crying, too. But there was the only person with cold eyes. It was my younger sister. After the movie, we talked about the movie <Miracle in Cell No.7> and three of us(me, my mother, and my dad) decided that the movie is the best movie we have ever seen. But my sister disagreed with that. She said, "Why is that movie touching? I cannot understand your words. Why did that man go to cell? This movie is very unrealistic." Well, I cannot remember that exactly, but me and my sister discussed a long time because of that topic. Until May, many people watched <Miracle in Cell No.7>. Many people talked about that movie on the subway, at school, at the academy, and even in the restaurent! Many people liked that movie. And it is the most popular film now. Now I believe my mother's information. She wanted me to watch some movies, and all movies that she told me to watch are on the list. Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me tonight. And unfortunately, I think I cannot have a class with you tomorrow. If I can have a class with you on Wednesday, my mom will tell you. Sorry for that. See you tomorrow, and don't forget to call to my cell phone if we can have a class!(010-3188-9935) Annie. 답변자 tc0080 답변일 2014-01-10 답변내용 Hi Annie! I'm so sorry if I only replied today. I already checked your diary but we encountered some technical difficulties so I wasn't able to send you my message. I was also on emergency leave yesterday so I couldn't take your class. Anyway, like what I said last time I'm impressed that you did your homework. I think you are a very diligent student. I hope you maintain that way throughout our class. I hope you enjoyed your camp! Take care! Here are your corrections: <Miracle in Cell No.7> On March 1st, my mother said to me like this. "Let's go to a theater and watch a movie." >> On March 1st, my mother told me like this, "Let's go to the theater and watch a movie." I refused to go, because I don't like watching movies, but I had to go. (Correct!) The movie was very touching. (Correct!) In the end of the movie, I was crying with the actress on the screen. (Correct!) My parents, and other viewers were crying, too. >> My parents and the other viewers were crying, too! But there was the only person with cold eyes. It was my younger sister. >> But there was only one person with cold eyes, it was my younger sister. After the movie, we talked about the movie <Miracle in Cell No.7> and three of us(me, my mother, and my dad) decided that the movie is the best movie we have ever seen. >> After the movie, we talked about it and the three of us (me, my mother, and my dad) decided that the movie is the best movie we had ever seen. But my sister disagreed with that. (Correct!) She said, "Why is that movie touching? I cannot understand your words. Why did that man go to cell? This movie is very unrealistic." >> She said, "Why is that movie touching? I cannot understand your opinions. Why did that man go to jail? This movie is very unrealistic." Well, I cannot remember that exactly, but me and my sister discussed a long time because of that topic. >> Well, I cannot remember that exactly, but me and my sister discussed that topic for a long time. Until May, many people watched <Miracle in Cell No.7>. (Correct!) Many people talked about that movie on the subway, at school, at the academy, and even in the restaurent! (Correct!) Many people liked that movie. And it is the most popular film now. >> Many people liked that movie and it is the most popular film now. Now I believe my mother's information. >> Now, I believe what my mother is telling me. She wanted me to watch some movies, and all movies that she told me to watch are on the list. >> She wanted me to watch some movies, and all the movies that she told me to watch are on the list. Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me tonight. And unfortunately, I think I cannot have a class with you tomorrow. If I can have a class with you on Wednesday, my mom will tell you. Sorry for that. See you tomorrow, and don't forget to call to my cell phone if we can have a class!(010-3188-9935) Annie.