1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2014-01-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Snow 내 용 Today, It snowed and I reallt hate it. I really hate it because It becomes too cold. and thefloor becomes too slipery. I really hate it. That's why it took really long time for me to go academy and late, kkk Whatever, when I was young, I used to like snow because I could play with it. But now, I'd rather play computer games than snow fighting. and I really hate the snow beause it looks soft, but it is too wet. that's why I hate snow. Actually I hate summer and winter. I hope it will stop snowing. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2014-01-21 답변내용 Today, It snowed and I reallt hate it. Today, [it] snowed and I [really] hate it. I really hate it because It becomes too cold. and thefloor becomes too slipery. I really hate it because [it] becomes too [cold and the floor] becomes too [slippery.] I really hate it. [Correct!] That's why it took really long time for me to go academy and late, kkk That's why it took [me a really long time] to go [to the] academy and [I was late.] Whatever, when I was young, I used to like snow because I could play with it. [Whatever. When] I was young, I used to like snow because I could play with it. But now, I'd rather play computer games than snow fighting. But now, I'd rather play computer games than snow [fight.] and I really hate the snow beause it looks soft, but it is too wet. [And] I really hate the snow beause it looks soft, but it is too wet. that's why I hate snow. [That's] why I hate snow. Actually I hate summer and winter. [Actually,] I hate summer and winter. I hope it will stop snowing. I hope it [stops] snowing. Notes: 1. Please be careful with your verb tenses. 2. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 3. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing! ^^ - Teacher Tracy