1
I'll always remember you.
2016-02-25
2
Chocolate's truth??
2016-02-18
3
The thing which makes humans different from robots
2015-07-08
4
My favorite character!
2015-07-04
5
The poem that I wrote a year ago
2015-07-02
6
Animals
2015-06-10
7
I think...
2014-08-05
8
Vacation?
2014-07-29
9
Final?
2014-06-24
10
Meditation
2014-06-17
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
ȸ ¿ø
°íÇýÁ¤
ÀÛ¼ºÀÏ
2014-01-29
Weather
Feeling
Pleasure
Á¦ ¸ñ
Take care!
³» ¿ë
Eat fruits and drink water often. Don't forget to take your medicine and rest well. Sleep well and don't forget to keep your body clean. Eat well. Don't skip your meals. Keep your body warm. It's also good to drink tea. Citron tea, ginger tea. quince tea, and jujube tea is good for colds. I hope you to stay well. When you come back, don't come with your cold! And my e-mail adress is 00annie@naver.com. Goodbye, and I hope you to come back soon! Annie. Ah, I forgot to say this. The picture is my little sister, Kkomi. She is a hedgehog. And goodbye again.
image view
´äº¯ÀÚ
tc0080
´äº¯ÀÏ
2014-04-30
´äº¯³»¿ë
Corrections: Eat fruits and drink water often. >> Good sentence! Don't forget to take your medicine and rest well. >> Don't forget to take your medicine and take a rest. Sleep well and don't forget to keep your body clean. >> Very nice! Eat well. Don't skip your meals. >> Very good. Keep your body warm. >> Nice tip. :-) It's also good to drink tea. >> Good sentence! Citron tea, ginger tea. quince tea, and jujube tea is good for colds. >> Citron tea, ginger tea, quince tea and jujube tea are good for colds. I hope you to stay well. >> I hope you'll stay well. When you come back, don't come with your cold! >> I hope you'll be well when you come back! And my e-mail adress is 00annie@naver.com. = Correct Sentence Goodbye, and I hope you to come back soon! >> Goodbye! I hope you to see you again soon. Annie = ^^ Ah, I forgot to say this. >> Nice sentence. The picture is my little sister, Kkomi. >> In the picture is my little sister, Kkomi. She is a hedgehog. >> Good sentence. And goodbye again. >> Goodbye again! *** Those are very nice tips you have for your friend, °íÇýÁ¤! I'm pretty sure they'll help a lot to keep your friend well & healthy all the time. Good thought organization was also evident in your diary entry so I highly commend you for that. Just be mindful of your punctuations next time. All in all, good job! Hope to hear from you again soon! :-)