1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2014-02-01 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Seul Day 내 용 Today was Seul Day. I expected my family to give me a lot of money. and of coourse, my family gave me alot of money. So i was happy. I got almost 20,0000won. It was even more than my cousin's He lost a lot because he played go stop. I think it was kind of great because I could but really a lot of things. I can afford to charge my cash to the game and I can now eat a lot of delicoious Snack, but My Uncle he gave me 10,000won. He gave me the least even though I know that he is the richest person in my family. I really hate him. and I went Daegu to meet my grandmother. It was reaqlly good. My oter cousins are really cute. one is just 5years old and another is 10years odl. How cute they are. They are really cute. But not more than me. Ha. and good thing that my mother let me play game, and watch TV. She is really an angel to me. I really love her. I don't want to go to Seong Nam with my mother. I'm sure that my mom will say badthings about me that I played too much games. I became suddenly afraid of My future in my house. I hoope you had such a bad day in phillipines and bad luck for you 답변자 Addie 답변일 2014-02-03 답변내용 Today was Seul Day. Today was [Lunar New Year.] I expected my family to give me a lot of money. [Correct sentence.] and of coourse, my family gave me alot of money. [And] of coourse, my family gave me [a lot] of money. So i was happy. [So, I] was happy. I got almost 20,0000won. I got almost [200,000] won. It was even more than my cousin's It was even more than my [cousin's.] He lost a lot because he played go stop. He lost a lot because he played Go-Stop. I think it was kind of great because I could but really a lot of things. I think it was kind of great because I could [buy] really a lot of things. I can afford to charge my cash to the game and I can now eat a lot of delicoious Snack, but My Uncle he gave me 10,000won. I can afford to [spend] my cash to [games] and I can now eat a lot of [delicious snacks. However, my uncle only] gave me [10,000 won.] He gave me the least even though I know that he is the richest person in my family. He gave me the least [money] even though I know that he is the richest person in my family. I really hate him. [Correct sentence.] and I went Daegu to meet my grandmother. [And] I went Daegu to meet my grandmother. It was reaqlly good. It was [really] good. My oter cousins are really cute. My [other] cousins are really cute. one is just 5years old and another is 10years odl. [One] is just [five years] old and [the other one] is [ten years old.] How cute they are. How cute [are they?] They are really cute. [Correct sentence.] But not more than me. [Correct sentence.] Ha. [Ha!] and good thing that my mother let me play game, and watch TV. [And] good thing that my mother let me play [a game] and watch TV. She is really an angel to me. [Correct sentence.] I really love her. [Correct sentence.] I don't want to go to Seong Nam with my mother. I don't want to go to [Seongnam] with my mother. I'm sure that my mom will say badthings about me that I played too much games. I'm sure that my mom will say [bad things] about me [because] I played too much games. I became suddenly afraid of My future in my house. I became suddenly afraid of [my] future in my house. I hoope you had such a bad day in phillipines and bad luck for you I [hope] you had such a bad day in [the Philippines] and [I wish you bad luck.] Notes: 1. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 2. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 3. Be careful with your spelling.