1 I'll always remember you. 2016-02-25 2 Chocolate's truth?? 2016-02-18 3 The thing which makes humans different from robots 2015-07-08 4 My favorite character! 2015-07-04 5 The poem that I wrote a year ago 2015-07-02 6 Animals 2015-06-10 7 I think... 2014-08-05 8 Vacation? 2014-07-29 9 Final? 2014-06-24 10 Meditation 2014-06-17 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10   회 원 고혜정 작성일 2014-02-04 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Salt? 내 용 I usually write the answers of Discussion Questions in the diary, So can you please correct me if I make mistakes? 1. Do you like salty food? How often do you eat it? 2. In your opinion, what can replace salt? 3. Make a sentence with the word “result in”. I don't like salty food that much. But my sister loves salty food. But fortunately, my mother doesn't make food salty. So in my home, we don't eat salty food that much. Even salt results in many diseases, salt is necessary for our lives. Nothing can replace salt's salty taste. But we can replace the main function of salt. According to a dictionary, Potassium can also send stimulus to cells. But the problem is people's intaking amount of salt. The recommended intake of salt is 5 grams per day, but average intake of Koreans is 15 grams per day. Because of Kimchi and Korean traditional sauces. Ancestors put salt in food to save food. But nowadays, we don't have to. So we can eat less salt than now. If you don't want to have diseases, please eat less salt and eat much Calcium, Potassium, and Protein. They encourage excreting salt out of our bodies. Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me tonight. Wow, it took 30 minutes to write this. Anyway, see you tomorrow! Annie. 답변자 ts0040 답변일 2014-02-05 답변내용 Hi Annie! I'm glad that you spare some time for your diary. Don't worry, I will be giving suggestions and corrections from your sentences. It's good that you are aware about the benefits and risks of salt in our body. Just to clarify about potassium and salt. You are correct that they both help send stimulus but they have totally different functions. These two electrolytes work hand in hand. T.April (◕‿◕✿) *Please see below for sentence corrections and suggestions. I don't like salty food that much. But my sister loves salty food. >>GOOD SENTENCE! But fortunately, my mother doesn't make food salty. BETTER: Fortunately, my mother doesn't make salty food. So in my home, we don't eat salty food that much. BETTER: So, we don't eat much salty food that much. Even salt results in many diseases, salt is necessary for our lives. BETTER: Despite salt risks for our health, it is still necessary to our lives. Nothing can replace salt's salty taste. But we can replace the main function of salt. According to a dictionary, Potassium can also send stimulus to cells. >>VERYGOOD! But the problem is people's intaking amount of salt. BETTER: The problem is people's salt intake. The recommended intake of salt is 5 grams per day, but average intake of Koreans is 15 grams per day. Because of Kimchi and Korean traditional sauces. *The recommended intake of salt is 5 grams per day, but average intake of Koreans is 15 grams per day because of Kimchi and Korean traditional sauces. Ancestors put salt in food to save food. BETTER: Our ancestors use salt to preserve food. But nowadays, we don't have to. So we can eat less salt than now. BETTER: But nowadays, we can use less salt than before. If you don't want to have diseases, please eat less salt and eat much Calcium, Potassium, and Protein. They encourage excreting salt out of our bodies. >>GOOD SENTENCES!PERFECT VOCABULARY!