1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2014-02-18 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 To Chicago. 내 용 We ate fronze yogurt. And than, Livia said, "We want go back to our home town."Livia said. "Where's your hometown, then?"Amelia asked. "Chicago.Here is our airpaine tickets.We aways wanted to say thank you to you."I said. "Why..?Why you had to go back?"Amelia wispered. "Because our family waiting for us."I answered. Amelia start to sob. "What's happening, Miss?"housekeeper asked in outdoor. "Butt out, silly goose!"Amelia shouted. Housekeeper went out. "I'm sorry, Amelia.What is you phone number?I'll call you when I arrive at Chicago."Livia said. We take each other's phone numbers. Next day, we start to packing our thingys and go to airport. "Bye..."Livia and I said. "Bye..Bye.."Amelia sobbed. And we take our airplain and go to Chicago. -One story's finished.- 답변자 tc0124 답변일 2014-02-21 답변내용 We ate fronze yogurt. >> We ate frozen yogurt. And than, Livia said, >> And then Livia said, "We want go back to our home town."Livia said. >> "We want to go back to our hometown", said Livia. "Where's your hometown, then?"Amelia asked. >> correct << "Chicago.Here is our airpaine tickets.We aways wanted to say thank you to you."I said. >> "In Chicago. Here's our airplane tickets. We always wanted to thank you". I said. "Why..?Why you had to go back?"Amelia wispered. >> "Why..? Why do you have to go back?" Amelia whispered. "Because our family waiting for us."I answered. >> "It's because our family is waiting for us." I answered. Amelia start to sob. >> Amelia started to sob. "What's happening, Miss?"housekeeper asked in outdoor. >> "What's happening, Miss? The housekeeper outdoor asked. "Butt out, silly goose!"Amelia shouted. >> correct << Housekeeper went out. >> The housekeeper went out. "I'm sorry, Amelia. >> correct << What is you phone number? >> What is your phone number? I'll call you when I arrive at Chicago."Livia said. >> I'll call you when I arrived in Chicago", said Livia. We take each other's phone numbers. >> We took each other's phone number. Next day, we start to packing our thingys and go to airport. >> The next day, we started packing our things and went to the airport. "Bye..."Livia and I said. >> correct << "Bye..Bye.."Amelia sobbed. >> correct << And we take our airplain and go to Chicago. >> And we took to the airpalne and went to Chicago. -One story's finished.- ******* Hi Esther, you finised another story. It was good story. More practice and then you'll become a great author someday. Continue writing my dear! :)