1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2014-02-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 SOCHI 2014 내 용 There is a winter olympic in sochi Russia. Korea was expected to rank top 10, but korea is ranking 16th now. A lot of players failed to get medals. In Vancouver, we got 3gold medals and 3 silver medals in speed skating, however, we got only 1 gold medal. I'm pretty sad about it. I hope korean players to cheer up and get more medals. I think we will have an emergecy for getting medal in Pyeongchang winter olympics in2018. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2014-02-21 답변내용 There is a winter olympic in sochi Russia. [The Winter Olympics is held] in [Sochi] Russia. Korea was expected to rank top 10, but korea is ranking 16th now. Korea was expected to rank [in the] top 10, but [Korea is ranks] 16th now. A lot of players failed to get medals. [Correct] In Vancouver, we got 3gold medals and 3 silver medals in speed skating, In Vancouver, we got [ three] gold medals and [three] silver medals in speed [skating.] however, we got only 1 gold medal. [However,] we [only got one] gold medal. I'm pretty sad about it. [Correct!] I hope korean players to cheer up and get more medals. I hope [the Korean] players [will] cheer up and get more medals. I think we will have an emergecy for getting medal in Pyeongchang winter olympics in2018. I think [we need to get a] medal in Pyeongchang [Winter Olympics in 2018.] Notes: 1. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 2. Always remember to use capital letters to start a proper noun. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing! - Teacher Tracy