1 I'll always remember you. 2016-02-25 2 Chocolate's truth?? 2016-02-18 3 The thing which makes humans different from robots 2015-07-08 4 My favorite character! 2015-07-04 5 The poem that I wrote a year ago 2015-07-02 6 Animals 2015-06-10 7 I think... 2014-08-05 8 Vacation? 2014-07-29 9 Final? 2014-06-24 10 Meditation 2014-06-17 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10   회 원 고혜정 작성일 2014-02-25 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Education of Korea 내 용 Education of Korea is not good. Korean students' score is very high, but they don't enjoy studying. Adults are making students as the studying machine in Korea. But if students can enjoy studying, that means Korean students can become the smartest students in the world. What adults have to do is help students to enjoy studying. I like Math and Science, and I like learning new things. But I don't like studying in Korea. Even I hate to study. There is no need for words. Everyone hates studying in Korea. The reason why I talk like this is my attitude. I like learning, but other students don't. Can you guess what I want to tell? Teacher! Thank you for having a freetalking about the article with me tonight. See you tomorrow! Annie. 답변자 ts0040 답변일 2014-02-25 답변내용 Hi Annie! I know that you are a very curious girl and that is impressive. I understand how hard it is to study especially with pressure. But it will always be better than not giving a chance to study at all. Every time you feel like giving up studying just remember that thousands of children all over the world would wish for your situation. Many are not given a chance. Many have fought to survive even just a day. Despite life's imperfection, let's look on the positive side of it. T.April **Your sentences are good. The chose good words to express your ideas. You can also try to use more describing words to make your writing more effective.