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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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They ate cakes, sweets and have a great time. But someone ran toward to music room and open the door. "Guys!The singer, Donna Eline was kid-napped!"someone said. It was Lavender's friend Ginny. "What?!No way.She have a lots of strong bodyguards."Mackenzie said. "Yeah, she's right.Who can hurt that bodyguards?They looks like Hulk!"Larvender said. Ginny look stuffyed. "No, guys.It's real!That kid-napper attacked all the bodyguards!"Ginny shouted"The polices are started to find her!" "Wow, it's real?Oh, my gosh.What are we going to do?"Lavender said. "What about her parents?I think they have Donna's phonenumber."Rebeca said. "Her parents are in abroad.And they even don't know Donna's grandma bought her a phone, so they don't know Donna's phonenumber!"Ginny shouted. "It's was like birdbrain, right?"Rebeca wispered. "Guys.I know her.."May mumbled."Know..her phonenumber.." Everyone looks surprised. "How..do you know that?"Lavender said.
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They ate cakes, sweets and have a great time. >> They ate cakes, sweets and had a great time. But someone ran toward to music room and open the door. >> But someone run towards the music room and opened the door. "Guys!The singer, Donna Eline was kid-napped!"someone said. >> "Guys! The singer, Donna Eline was kidnapped!" Someone said. It was Lavender's friend Ginny. >> correct << "What?!No way.She have a lots of strong bodyguards."Mackenzie said. >> "What?! No way. She has a lot of strong bodyguards", said Mackenzie. "Yeah, she's right. >> correct << Who can hurt that bodyguards? >> Who ca hurt those bodyguards? They looks like Hulk!"Larvender said. >> They looks like Hulk!" Lavender said. Ginny look stuffyed. >> Ginny looked stuffed. "No, guys.It's real! >> correct << That kid-napper attacked all the bodyguards!" >> That kidnapper attacked all her bodygurads!" Ginny shouted"The polices are started to find her!" >> Ginny shouted, "The police were starting to find her!" "Wow, it's real?Oh, my gosh.What are we going to do?"Lavender said. >> correct << "What about her parents?I think they have Donna's phonenumber."Rebeca said. >> correct << "Her parents are in abroad. >> correct << And they even don't know Donna's grandma bought her a phone, so they don't know Donna's phonenumber!"Ginny shouted. >> correct << "It's was like birdbrain, right?"Rebeca wispered. >> "It's like a birdbrain, right?" Rebeca whispered. "Guys.I know her.."May mumbled."Know..her phonenumber.." >> correct << Everyone looks surprised. >> Everyone look surprised. "How..do you know that?"Lavender said. >> "How did you know that?" Lavender asked.