1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2014-03-21 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Location pursuit plane. 내 용 "Do you know where's Donna?"Lavender asked to May. "Ah..yeah, I think.She install location pursuit plane on her phone.And..here she is!"May shouted. Everyone look at May's phone.Location pursuit plane dirrected to Doodles market. "In Doodles market..secret passage."Mackenzie said. "How did you know there was secret passage?"Rebeca asked. "When I was young, I visit Doodles market alone for buying my favorite jelly.My favorite jelly is located on high place, so I hop up and down.At last, one pack of jelly fell off to the ground and I pick up.And when I pick that jelly, I saw very small door under the shelf. That door is covered with dust bunnies..."Mackenzie answered. 답변자 ts0060 답변일 2014-03-23 답변내용 "Do you know where's Donna?"Lavender asked to May. >>"Do you know where's Donna?", Lavender asked May. "Ah..yeah, I think.She install location pursuit plane on her phone.And..here she is!"May shouted. >>"Ah...yeah. I think she installed location pursuit plane on her phone...and here she is!", May shouted. Everyone look at May's phone.Location pursuit plane dirrected to Doodles market. >>Everyone looked at May's phone. Location pursuit plane bought from Doodles market. "In Doodles market..secret passage."Mackenzie said. >>"In Doodles market...secret passage.", Mackenzie said. "How did you know there was secret passage?"Rebeca asked. >>"How did you know that there was a secret passage?", Rebeca asked. "When I was young, I visit Doodles market alone for buying my favorite jelly. >>"When I was young, I visited Doodles market alone to buy my favorite jelly. My favorite jelly is located on high place, so I hop up and down. >>My favorite jelly is placed on a high shelf, so I jumped to reach it. At last, one pack of jelly fell off to the ground and I pick up. >>At last! One pack of jelly fell to the ground and I picked it up. And when I pick that jelly, I saw very small door under the shelf. >>This sentence is almost correct!^^ Just don't forget your verb tenses and sentence articles. It's better to say it this way... "And when I picked that jelly, I saw a very small door under the shelves." That door is covered with dust bunnies..."Mackenzie answered. >>Good sentence! ******************************************************************************************************************************* Hi Esther! Thank you for sharing this diary entry with me! :) Wow! Is this a story from a book? I think it's very interesting! I guess it's a story of adventure and fantasy. Looking forward to more learning with you! Have a happy Sunday! -Teacher Paula