1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2014-03-25 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Dream..? 내 용 That night, Mackenzie have a dream. "Two..security cameras..and three..big dogs..and..Doodles..."Mackenzie said in a sleep talking. "Mackenzie!Mackenzie!"someone called her. Mackenzie woke up.Her mother and father were sitting in her bed. "Mom, dad!What are you doing in here?Why don't you sleep?"Mackenzie asked. "You shouted when you sleep.And you said a sleep talking, too."her mother answered."You said, two security cameras and three big dogs an Doodles.Who is Doodles?" "I said that?!Well...my note!"Mackenzie shouted and started to wrote her sleep talking in her note. Next morning, Mackenzie said that story to her friends. "You said..you never see inside that secret passage, right?"Lavender asked. "Well..I heard the dogs are baking in that passage, just a once.But I never see in side that secret passage."Mackenzie said. "And..who is Doodles?"Rebecca asked. "D..Doodles is...just..um..."Mackenzie stammered. 답변자 ts0060 답변일 2014-03-25 답변내용 That night, Mackenzie have a dream. >>That night, Mackenzie had a dream. * You should use had because it is the past tense of have. "Two..security cameras..and three..big dogs..and..Doodles...", Mackenzie said in a sleep talking. >>"Two...security cameras...and three...big dogs...and...Doodles...", Mackenzie said while sleep talking. * If you are going to use ellipses[...] make sure it is three periods.^^ "Mackenzie!Mackenzie!"someone called her. >>Correct! Just don't forget the correct format and the punctuation marks. >>"Mackenzie! Mackenzie!", someone called her. Mackenzie woke up.Her mother and father were sitting in her bed. >>Great sentences! "Mom, dad!What are you doing in here?Why don't you sleep?"Mackenzie asked. >>Very good! "You shouted when you sleep.And you said a sleep talking, too."her mother answered. >>"You shouted during your sleep. And you are sleep talking, too.", her mother answered. "You said, two security cameras and three big dogs and Doodles.Who is Doodles?" >>Correct! "I said that?!Well...my note!"Mackenzie shouted and started to wrote her sleep talking in her note. >>Very well said! Next morning, Mackenzie said that story to her friends. >>Next morning, Mackenzie told the story to her friends. "You said..you never see inside that secret passage, right?"Lavender asked. >>"You said...you never went inside that secret passage, right?", Lavender asked. "Well..I heard the dogs are baking in that passage, just a once.But I never see in side that secret passage."Mackenzie said. >>"Well...I heard barking dogs in that passage once. But I never saw what is inside that secret passage.", Mackenzie said. "And..who is Doodles?"Rebecca asked. >>Great! "D..Doodles is...just..um..."Mackenzie stammered. >>Nice! ******************************************************************************************** Hi Esther! I am very proud that you only made few mistakes in writing this part of your story. Looking forward to the next chapter! ^^ -Teacher Paula