1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2014-03-25 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Soccer game 내 용 sincewe became the 4rd grade in middle school we started to play soccer game. I don't know why they aredoing it I'm playing soccer force. I really hate it. I'd rather just play insidein my classroom. I used to play soccer when i was young. and they know that I'm not that bad at soccer so I am just standing outside the field. I don't know what I'm doing. Even though I don't play, other friends just make a goal and my class 3-7 has won 3times while we are playing 3 times. I really didn't do anything. I touched ball only 3 times and I neverranin the game , but that sucking friends are still expecting for me to play soccer hard. and I'll never do that. I think I really do not like playing soccer. If they don't pull me out I'll really walk. I hope I won't play soccer anymore 답변자 Addie 답변일 2014-03-26 답변내용 sincewe became the 4rd grade in middle school we started to play soccer game. [since we] became [fourth] grade in middle [school,] we started to play soccer [games.] I don't know why they aredoing it I'm playing soccer force. I don't know why they [are doing it. I was forced to play soccer.] I really hate it. I really [hated] it. I'd rather just play insidein my classroom. I'd rather [play inside my] classroom. I used to play soccer when i was young. I used to play soccer when [I] was young. and they know that I'm not that bad at soccer so I am just standing outside the field. [And] they [knew] that I [was] not that bad at [soccer,] so I [was] just standing outside the field. I don't know what I'm doing. I [did not] know what [I was] doing. Even though I don't play, other friends just make a goal and my class 3-7 has won 3times while we are playing 3 times. Even though I [did not] play, other friends [made] a goal and my [class, 3-7, had] won [three] times [in three games.] I really didn't do anything. [Correct!] I touched ball only 3 times and I neverranin the game , but that sucking friends are still expecting for me to play soccer hard. I touched [the] ball only [for three] times and I [never ran in] the game , but [my friends were] still [expecting me] to play soccer hard. and I'll never do that. [And I would] never do that. I think I really do not like playing soccer. I think I [do not really] likeplaying soccer. If they don't pull me out I'll really walk. If they [did not] pull me [out, I would] really [walk away.] I hope I won't play soccer anymore I hope I won't play soccer [anymore.] Notes: 1. Please be careful with your verb tenses. 2. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 3. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! Thanks for sharing! - Teacher Tracy