1 I'll always remember you. 2016-02-25 2 Chocolate's truth?? 2016-02-18 3 The thing which makes humans different from robots 2015-07-08 4 My favorite character! 2015-07-04 5 The poem that I wrote a year ago 2015-07-02 6 Animals 2015-06-10 7 I think... 2014-08-05 8 Vacation? 2014-07-29 9 Final? 2014-06-24 10 Meditation 2014-06-17 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10   회 원 고혜정 작성일 2014-03-25 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 I love psychology 내 용 Sometimes Navercasts are very helpful. I can know more things, and make myself feel happy. But there is a problem. If I cannot understnad one thing, and even my parents don't know, and I have to understand it all by myself. But it is useful. I transtlated the text in my moral textbook that I learned last year. 'There are mothers who watch every movement of there children. For example, get up, meals, laundry, ironing, trimming shoes, etc. They take the score, major, and map out their childrens' career path of their childrens who are now university students and grown-ups. We call them as 'helicopter mom'. Helicopter mom means the mothers who hovers around their children like helicopters after they become grown-ups, watch and control children, and throw themselves into a matter with enthusiasm if it is a matter of their children.' Helicopter moms are not good mothers because they are creathing a generation incapable of dealing with failure. Every mothers want their children to succeed, but they don't know that themselves are making their children to lose their opinion and thinks. I want to tell to all helicopter mothers this - if you want your children to succeed, make them to solve all things by themselves, and they will find the perfect way for them to go. Because of parents, students are losing their opinion, thinks, and their dreams. Give back dreams to us! Teacher! Thank you for having a class with me tonight. Wow, I coulnd't write the diary for two weeks because I was too busy. But I finished my homework for tomorrow. So I'm writing. See you tomorrow! Annie. 답변자 ts0040 답변일 2014-03-26 답변내용 Hi Annie! I understand that you have been busy. I am grateful that you wrote a very interesting diary. Please see some of my corrections. Try to improve your writing by using better adjectives to describe so you won't have to use general expressions like 'things'. Try to be more specific about the idea that you are sharing. Thank you! T.April If I cannot understnad one thing, and even my parents don't know, and I have to understand it all by myself. BETTER: If there is a topic that is incomprehensible and even my parents can't understand it, then I need to understand it by myself. But it is useful. BETTER: It is however useful. Every mothers want their children to succeed, but they don't know that themselves are making their children to lose their opinion and thinks. BETTER: Every mother wants their children to succeed but they are not aware of making their children less decisive and dependent.