1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2014-03-27 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Just like a dream! 내 용 "Well...okey.I think I can do that.If that secret passage have any security cameras."May said. "I think in secret passage, there was two security cameras."Mackenzie said. May, Rebecca and Lavender looked at her. "How did you know that?"Lavender asked. "I have a dream yesterday...and I was in strange place...and there was two security cameras and three big dogs and Doodles."Mackenzie said. "It was nightmare?I think your dream is kind of scary.Anyway, we had to belive that now.But it as impossible thing in real world."Rebecca said. "Um...guys, the school pajama day is just left two days.We had to prepare.Let's go to Doodle's market.We had to search security cameras in market."May said. So they went to the market.May searched some security cameras. "They use two security cameras from Bing-bong security company, number 945269-325523 and 345677-437623."May said. "What numbers?"Mackenzie asked. "The camera's secret numbers.If you know that, you can see every security cameras that connects with this cameras that used in market."May asked. "And...how did you know that secret number?"Rebecca asked. "I have a my own hacking invention.You D.K.N."May answered. "You called me D.K.N?What's D.K.N.?"Rebecca said. 답변자 ts0060 답변일 2014-03-28 답변내용 "Well...okey.I think I can do that.If that secret passage have any security cameras."May said. "I think in secret passage, there was two security cameras."Mackenzie said. May, Rebecca and Lavender looked at her. "How did you know that?"Lavender asked. >>Great! "I have a dream yesterday...and I was in strange place...and there was two security cameras and three big dogs and Doodles."Mackenzie said. >>"I had a dream yesterday...and I was in strange place...and there were two security cameras and three big dogs and Doodles."Mackenzie said. ★ Use the word "had" instead of "have" when talking about a thing that already happened. ★ Use the word "were" instead of "was" if you are describing objects that are more than one. "It was nightmare?I think your dream is kind of scary.Anyway, we had to belive that now.But it as impossible thing in real world."Rebecca said. >>"Was it a nightmare? I think your dream is kind of scary. Anyway, we have to believe that now but it's an impossible thing in the real world.", Rebecca said. ★ If you are asking a question, you should say, "Was it...?" Example: Question= Was it a dog? Answer= Yes, it was a dog. "Um...guys, the school pajama day is just left two days.We had to prepare.Let's go to Doodle's market.We had to search security cameras in market."May said. >>"Um...guys, we only have two days left before the school pajama day. We have to prepare. Let's go to Doodle's market. We have to search the security cameras in the market.", May said. So they went to the market.May searched some security cameras. >>So they went to the market. May searched for some security cameras. "They use two security cameras from Bing-bong security company, number 945269-325523 and 345677-437623."May said. "What numbers?"Mackenzie asked. >> These are good sentences! "The camera's secret numbers.If you know that, you can see every security cameras that connects with this cameras that used in market."May asked. >>"The camera's secret numbers. If you know that, you can see every security camera in the market that is connected to ours" May said. "And...how did you know that secret number?"Rebecca asked. "I have a my own hacking invention.You D.K.N."May answered. "You called me D.K.N?What's D.K.N.?"Rebecca said. >>Perfect! ************************************************************************************************* You are really improving, Esther! I hope you take note of the corrections and compile it to a file for future references. :) GOOD JOB! -Teacher Paula