1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2014-04-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Wow... 내 용 "Shh!What...what happened?!This is...another world...!"Lavender said. "Come on.Let's look around...no one will notice us."May said. But she's wrong.Someone notice May. "Miss!Miss Mayble!"someone shouted. "Run!"May shouted. They started to run.Someone grab something from his poket and pointed it to them. Then May grab something her poket, too.And pointed it to someone. "Stop it, Major!"May shouted."Abadora Obogaso!" Than white flash through out to someone called Major.Major save it. "Sorry, master.But I have to.I am so sorry."Major said. 답변자 ts0060 답변일 2014-04-04 답변내용 "Shh!What...what happened?!This is...another world...!"Lavender said. "Come on.Let's look around...no one will notice us."May said. >>Great sentences! But she's wrong.Someone notice May. >>She's wrong, someone noticed May. "Miss!Miss Mayble!"someone shouted. "Run!"May shouted. They started to run. >>These are correct sentences. :) Someone grab something from his poket and pointed it to them. >>Someone grabbed something from his pocket and pointed it to them. Then May grab something her poket, too.And pointed it to someone. >>Then May also grabbed something from her pocket and pointed it to someone. "Stop it, Major!"May shouted."Abadora Obogaso!" >>Very good! Than white flash through out to someone called Major.Major save it. >>Then a white light flashed to this man called Major. Major saved it. "Sorry, master.But I have to.I am so sorry."Major said. >>"Sorry, master but I have to. I am so sorry." Major said. **You should not place the word But at the start of the sentence, it should be connected to your first sentence. ^^ ************************************************************************************************ Hi Esther, Who is this Major? I'm so curious, I can't wait to read the next part. Is May one of them? Ooh this is so exciting! :) -Teacher Paula