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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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They arrived at Bombus's icecream store. The store was empty and quiet. "Bombus!Where are you?I'm Mable May!"May shouted. Then behind the counter, a men stand up slowly. "May?Wow, long time no see, huh?Hey, whose are these girls?"men said. "Oh, Bombus!Glad to meet you again!These are my friend from human's world."May answered. "Hum, hum.You can' t see me?Am I invisible men?"Uka grumbled. Then a men who called Bombus hugged him very hard.
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They arrived at Bombus's icecream store. The store was empty and quiet. "Bombus!Where are you?I'm Mable May!"May shouted. >>These sentences are correct! Then behind the counter, a men stand up slowly. >>A man stood up slowly behind the counter. "May?Wow, long time no see, huh?Hey, whose are these girls?"men said. >>Very good! "Oh, Bombus!Glad to meet you again!These are my friend from human's world."May answered. >>"Oh, Bombus! Glad to meet you again! These are my friends from the human world.", May answered. "Hum, hum.You can' t see me?Am I invisible men?"Uka grumbled. >>"Hum, hum. Can't you see me? Am I invisible?", Uka grumbled. Then a men who called Bombus hugged him very hard. >>Bombus hugged him really tight. **************************************************************************************** Hello Esther! Wow! Your writing has improved! There were only few mistakes found in your entry today. Keep up the good work! -Teacher Paula