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today is Final of April.today i think i have to look back my past of April.This April is not good.Because i was reproved by my parents for disobedience.And i don't made a chart of daily schedule.Also,i didn't study hard. So i ruin ordinary estimation. So,i will promise my conscience. First,i will made a chart of daily schedule,and i keep one's promise,study hard.So i will success ordinary estimation. And i will obedient to my parents.
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Hi! Thank you for writing. I'm so glad to read your entry. Here are your corrections: today is Final of April.today i think i have to look back my past of April. = It's the end of April and I think I have to look back on my achievements for this month. This April is not good. Because i was reproved by my parents for disobedience. = This month is not good because I was scolded by my parents for disobidience. And i don't made a chart of daily schedule.Also,i didn't study hard. = I didn't acomplished my daily schedule and didn't study hard too. So i ruin ordinary estimation. So,i will promise my conscience. = So I ruin their expectation. First,i will made a chart of daily schedule,and i keep one's promise,study hard. = First, I will make a chart of my daily schedule, keep it, and promise to study hard. So i will success ordinary estimation. = So that I will meet my parent's expectation. And i will obedient to my parents. = I will try to obey my parent. Good decision...i guess another way to thank your parent is to obey them and do your obligation as a student and as a child. I guess you're nice, however, sometimes we feel lazy and tired. Do your best next time!. I know you can do it. Cheer up! You can do it!... ^-^ Teacher