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I'll always remember you.
2016-02-25
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Chocolate's truth??
2016-02-18
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The thing which makes humans different from robots
2015-07-08
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My favorite character!
2015-07-04
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The poem that I wrote a year ago
2015-07-02
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Animals
2015-06-10
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I think...
2014-08-05
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Vacation?
2014-07-29
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Final?
2014-06-24
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Meditation
2014-06-17
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회 원
고혜정
작성일
2014-06-10
Weather
Feeling
Happy
제 목
Thunders
내 용
Today is rainy. There are thunders and lightnings... It's raining too much! Like I said in the poem, I like deep blue sky, clear sky. I don't like rainy days! Oh, I forgot to say this, I wrote that poem last week. It took me 30 minutes to write it, but I enjoyed it because I like writing poems sometimes. I like writing poems, some stories on rainy days. I don't know why, but it makes an odd atmosphere. I like that mood. Do you want me to write another one? Title : Thunderstorms' race Do you know the Thunderstorm brothers? They always run to win the other, But the outcome is always defined. "I am faster than you, my brother!" Thunder yells to his brother, "No way, I am faster than you!" Lightning answers to his brother. They always run to win their brother, But the Lightning always wins. "Now I proved it, I am faster!" said the Lightning to the Thunder. "Next time, I will win the race!" Thunder yells and screams loudly. And that's the reason why the Thunder Always be noisy when he comes. He is angry 'cause he couldn't win his brother, but he wants to win. So do not try to run with Thunder if you can run faster than him. He would be mad, so he will scream And it would be the loudest scream. Teacher! How was the poem? It can be... a funny story, I think. Anyway, thank you for having a class with me tonight. See you on Thursday! Annie.
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답변일
2014-06-11
답변내용
Today is rainy. There are thunders and lightnings... It's raining too much! Like I said in the poem, I like deep blue sky, clear sky. I don't like rainy days! Oh, I forgot to say this, I wrote that poem last week. It took me 30 minutes to write it, but I enjoyed it because I like writing poems sometimes. I like writing poems, some stories on rainy days. I don't know why, but it makes an odd atmosphere. I like that mood. Do you want me to write another one? Title : Thunderstorms' race Do you know the Thunderstorm brothers? They always run to win the other, But the outcome is always defined. "I am faster than you, my brother!" Thunder yells to his brother, "No way, I am faster than you!" Lightning answers to his brother. They always run to win their brother, But the Lightning always wins. "Now I proved it, I am faster!" said the Lightning to the Thunder. "Next time, I will win the race!" Thunder yells and screams loudly. And that's the reason why the Thunder Always be noisy when he comes. He is angry 'cause he couldn't win his brother, but he wants to win. So do not try to run with Thunder if you can run faster than him. He would be mad, so he will scream And it would be the loudest scream. Teacher! How was the poem? It can be... a funny story, I think. Anyway, thank you for having a class with me tonight. See you on Thursday! Annie. >> (no correction) ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° ° ° ❤ ღ° Hi there Annie, It was really a great and funny poem. I think you really had a talent in making one. Maybe you could have your own collection of poem. I think I would buy one if you could publish it. Thank you for making me enjoy our class. Have a great day^^ ~ TEACHER TARA ~