1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2014-09-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 English speaking contest script 내 용 Hello, everyone. My name is Im Sebin. Do you guys have been read a book named 'Charlie and the chocolate factory' by Roald Dahl? I read this book really impressively because I really love unique snacks like in this book. I aways hope this Wonka's chocolate factory is a real so I can eat their many unique snacks. And last April, I knew a really amazing thing in my U.S. trevel. That amazing news is...Wonka's chocolate factory is real! I knew it when I ate a snack called 'Rainbow Nerds' from U.S. and as you can see, top of the box it says 'Wonka' in color purple. And behind the box, it says 'Feed your imagination, Wonka.com'. When I saw it, I nearly fell down because I'm so happy! Then, I visited Wnka.com right away! Oh my god...how this site is really mysterious and beautiful... And as you can see, in here there's a thing look like a tree, on this brenches there's a name of Wonka snacks. If you click a name on a branch, we can see nutrition facts and sister product like this. Isn't it really amazing??There's a lots of new great snacks around the world that our coutry don't have. So in my bucket list, I wrote "I'll eat other many country's snacks". Ah!Also, movie named 'wreck-it Ralph', they used Wonka's snacks in the game 'Sugar Rush'. Do you know why I like Wonka chocolate factory? Because, their snacks are delicious too, but they are creative and special. I want to make my own special snack like this Wonka factory. In internet they said, Wonka factory is really famouse, so I hope Wonka will be famouse in Korea too. I hope you guys eat Wonka's snacks, too. And Thank you for listening. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my script for my English speaking contest! Correct this please:D Thank you!! 답변자 ts0061 답변일 2014-09-18 답변내용 Hello, everyone. > Good sentence! My name is Im Sebin. > Good sentence! You can also say: I'm Im Sebin. Do you guys have been read a book named 'Charlie and the chocolate factory' by Roald Dahl? > Have you guys read the book 'Charlie and the Chocolate Factory' by Roald Dahl? I read this book really impressively because I really love unique snacks like in this book. > I've read this book and it's impressive. I really love the unique sweet in this book. (In this context, "sweets" is more appropriate than snacks.) I aways hope this Wonka's chocolate factory is a real so I can eat their many unique snacks. > I've been hoping that Wonka's factory is real so I can eat a lot of their unique sweets. And last April, I knew a really amazing thing in my U.S. trevel. > Last April during my stay in US, I found out something really amazing. That amazing news is...Wonka's chocolate factory is real! > That amazing news was Wonka's chocolate factory is real! I knew it when I ate a snack called 'Rainbow Nerds' from U.S. and as you can see, top of the box it says 'Wonka' in color purple. > I found it out when I ate a candy called 'Rainbow Nerds' from US and I saw the purple logo of Wonka at the top of the box. And behind the box, it says 'Feed your imagination, Wonka.com'. > Behind the box, it says 'Feed your imagination, Wonka.com'. When I saw it, I nearly fell down because I'm so happy! > When I saw it, I nearly fell down because of so much happiness. Then, I visited Wnka.com right away! > Then, I visited Wonka.com right away! Oh my god...how this site is really mysterious and beautiful... > Wow! That site was really mysterious and beautiful. And as you can see, in here there's a thing look like a tree, on this brenches there's a name of Wonka snacks. > At the website, you can see a tree which has the names of Wonka products its branches. If you click a name on a branch, we can see nutrition facts and sister product like this. > If you click a name on the branch, you can see the nutrition facts and other products. Isn't it really amazing??There's a lots of new great snacks around the world that our coutry don't have. > Isn't it amazing? There are a lot of great sweets around the world which our country don't have. So in my bucket list, I wrote "I'll eat other many country's snacks". > So, I wrote in my bucket list that I will eat a lot of sweets and chocolates from other countries. Ah!Also, movie named 'wreck-it Ralph', they used Wonka's snacks in the game 'Sugar Rush'. > In addition, the movie 'Wreck-it Ralph" used Wonka's sweets in the game 'Sugar Rush'. Do you know why I like Wonka chocolate factory? > Do you know why I like Wonka's chocolate factory? Because, their snacks are delicious too, but they are creative and special. > That is because their sweets are not just delicious but also creative and special. I want to make my own special snack like this Wonka factory. > I want to make my own sweets just like in the Wonka's factory. In internet they said, Wonka factory is really famouse, so I hope Wonka will be famouse in Korea too. > The internet says that Wonka's factory is really famous. I hope it will be famous in Korea, too. I hope you guys eat Wonka's snacks, too. > I hope you guys try Wonka sweets, too. And Thank you for listening. > Thank you for listening. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my script for my English speaking contest! Correct this please:D Thank you!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Esther! There you go. If you have any questions feel free to contact me. Have a nice day! :) -Teacher Sandy^^