1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-02-28 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My dream 내 용 My dream is now robot scientist. But, when I was only 5~7 years, my dream was changing. When I was 5 years old, my dream was just person. When I was 6 years old, my dream was also person. But, when I was 7 years old, first, I had my dream. It was takwondo player. But, I change my dream many time. Takwondo player-doctor-nurse-swimmer-car racer-zookeeper-and even shark tamer!!! When I was 7 years old, I got my kindergarten. But, I do not go to kindergarten when I was 7.5 years old. Because my mother said, “Wonho? What about not going to kindergarten? Let’s study at home.” Me:’No! they do lot’s of experience.” Mother:”Then what about this? I will buy you a beetle. Then you can study about beetle at home!” I had little interest in beetle. So, I said ok. Then, I want to be entormologist(study about insects.). So, I went to school, And said, I want to be the second fabre(the world’s greatest entormologist.)!! P.S. This become very embrassing story for me when I was 4th grade. On 2nd grade, I also want to be the entormologist. But, on 3rd grade, I saw a robot passing to me!! At science museum. Then, I think, ‘Ah, I want to be the robot scientist. But, before 4th grade, I want to be the DNA scientist. But, I saw movie ‘imformer’. It is about fraud DNA scientist. So, I don’t want to be the DNA scientist and want to become robot scientist. And here come huwinaro!!!! 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2015-03-03 답변내용 My dream is now robot scientist. -My dream is now to be a robot scientist. But, when I was only 5~7 years, my dream was changing. -But, when I was only 5 to 7 years old, my dream changed. When I was 5 years old, my dream was just person. -When I was 5 years old, my dream was just to be a person. When I was 6 years old, my dream was also person. -When I was 6 years old, my dream was also to be a person. But, when I was 7 years old, first, I had my dream. -But, when I was 7 years old, I had my first dream. It was takwondo player. -correct But, I change my dream many time. -But, I've changed my dream many times. Takwondo player-doctor-nurse-swimmer-car racer-zookeeper-and even shark tamer!!! -From taekwondo player to doctor, nurse, swimmer, car racer, zookeeper, and even shark tamer!!! When I was 7 years old, I got my kindergarten. -correct But, I do not go to kindergarten when I was 7.5 years old. -correct Because my mother said, “Wonho? What about not going to kindergarten? Let’s study at home.” -Because my mother said, “Wonho, what about not going to kindergarten? Let’s study at home.” Me:’No! they do lot’s of experience.” -But I said, "No! They give lots of experience." Mother:”Then what about this? I will buy you a beetle. Then you can study about beetle at home!” -"Then what about this? I will buy you a beetle. Then you can study about beetles at home!”, she said. I had little interest in beetle. -I had little interest in beetles. So, I said ok. -correct Then, I want to be entormologist(study about insects.). -Then, I wanted to be an entomologist, someone who studies about insects. So, I went to school, And said, I want to be the second fabre(the world’s greatest entormologist.)!! -So, I went to school and said I wanted to be the second Fabre, the world’s greatest entomologist! P.S. This become very embrassing story for me when I was 4th grade. -P.S. This became a very embrassing story for me when I was in 4th grade. On 2nd grade, I also want to be the entormologist. -In 2nd grade, I also wanted to be an entomologist. But, on 3rd grade, I saw a robot passing to me!! At science museum. -But in 3rd grade, I saw a robot passing by me at a science museum. Then, I think, ‘Ah, I want to be the robot scientist. -Then, I thought that I wanted to be a robot scientist. But, before 4th grade, I want to be the DNA scientist. -But, before I entered in 4th grade, I wanted to be a DNA scientist. But, I saw movie ‘imformer’. -However, I saw the movie "Informer". It is about fraud DNA scientist. -It is about a fraud DNA scientist. So, I don’t want to be the DNA scientist and want to become robot scientist. -So, I didn’t want to be a DNA scientist and wanted to become a robot scientist. And here come huwinaro!!!! -And here comes Huwinaro! Comments: Hi Huwinaro! It is a normal to have many dreams, so was I when I was a kid. But it's nice that you were able to decide now. :) Anyway, for this diary, I would like you to lessen your buts. You can use other conjunctions like however, therefore, aside from that, etc. Hence, your spelling improves! Great job! :)