1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-03-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Humanoid Adventure 7 내 용 No do not want to fight because No is not that good at fight. But, Huwinaro kick No and wake up him. Then, No saw an Aibo. And the first fight began at the maze. Tiny and Mutant began to fight!!!! Mutant is very crazy like the name. He has hand that bigger then leg!!! But, Mutant is very slow. But, Tiny is the fastest robot in this adventure. So, Tiny go toward the black hole. Mutant follow him and grab the Tiny!!!! But, when Mutant throw Tiny, Mutant lose his balance and go into black hole!!! What about Tiny???? Tiny was on the back of Mutant. So, he jump out of back and safely out. No try to speak with Aibo, but, Aibo is also remote controlling, and No crashed!!!!!! Huwinaro just play at the dome of control center. There is no robot that can climb up the dome of control center. But, Huwinaro has very many fur on feet, like gecko, Huwinaro can walk on walls, and even on celing!!!! So, Huwinaro just sit down at dome and turn off the all light. Because if Huwinaro turn off all light, Huwinaro is using very small battery but, the Huwinaro is still on. Free and America met at front of Aibo. But, both of them do not know. They began to fight!!! Then, America throw Free hard as he could!!! Free hit Huwinaro!!! But, Free was already crashed. So, Huwinaro climb up the dome again. America is also die because of Aibo…………….. 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2015-04-08 답변내용 No do( ) not want to fight because No is not that good at fight( ). >>>> No does not want to fight because No is not that good at fighting. But, Huwinaro kick( ) No and wake (up him). >>>> But, Huwinaro kicked No and wake him up. Then, No saw an Aibo. [GOOD!] And the first fight began at the maze. [NICE!] Tiny and Mutant began to fight!!!! [WOW!] Mutant is very crazy like (the) name. >>>> Mutant is very crazy like its name. He has () hand that () bigger th(e)n ( ) leg!!! >>>> He has a hand that is bigger than his leg!!! But, Mutant is very slow. [GOOD!] [But, ]Tiny is the fastest robot in this adventure. >>>> Tiny is the fastest robot in this adventure. So, Tiny go( ) toward the black hole. >>>> So, Tiny goes toward the black hole. Mutant follow( ) him and grab( ) [the] Tiny!!!! >>>> Mutant followed him and grabbed Tiny. But, when Mutant thr(ow) Tiny, Mutant los(e) his balance and (go) into ( ) black hole!!! >>>> But, when Mutant threw Tiny, Mutant lost his balance and went into the black hole!!! What about Tiny???? [NICE!] Tiny was (on) the back of Mutant. >>>> Tiny was at the back of Mutant. So, he jump( ) out (of) ( ) back and [safely out]. >>>> So, he jumped out from the back and went out safely. No tr(y ) to speak with Aibo, but, Aibo ( i)s also remote controlling(,) and No ( ) crashed!!!!!! >>>> No tried to speak with Aibo, but, AIbo was also remote controlling and No suddenly crashed!!! Huwinaro just play( ) at the dome of ( ) control center. >>>> Huwinaro played at the dome of the control center. There is no robot that can climb up the dome of ( ) control center. >>>> There is no robot that can climb up the dome of the control center. But, Huwinaro has very many fur on ( ) feet, like ( ) gecko, Huwinaro can walk on walls, and even on ( ) celing!!!! >>>> But, Huwinaro has very many fur on its feet, like a gecko, Huwinaro can walk on walls, and even on the celing!!!! So, Huwinaro just s(i)t down at ( ) dome and turn( ) off [the all] light. >>>> So, Huwinaro just sat down at the dome and turned off all the light. Because if Huwinaro turn() off [all] light, Huwinaro is using () very small battery but, the Huwinaro is still on. >>>> Because if Huwinaro turns off all the light, Huwinaro is using a very small battery but, the Huwinaro is still on. Free and America met (at) front of Aibo. >>>> Free and America met in front of Aibo. But, both of them do not know. [GOOD!] They began to fight!!! [NICE!] Then, America thr(o)w Free ( ) hard as he could!!! >>>> Then, America threw Free as hard as he could. Free hit Huwinaro!!! [WOW!] But, Free [was] already crashed. >>>> But, Free already crashed. So, Huwinaro climb( ) up the dome again. >>>> So, Huwinaro climbed up the dome again. America [is] also die() because of Aibo…………….. >>>> America also died because of Aibo…………….. Comments: The story is getting more and more interesting. Just follow my corrections and improve your sentences.