1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-04-02 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Humanoid adventure 9 내 용 Tiny met Rob then began to fight, United and Yo and Inha met and fight. But, Gpgpgp, R-190, Child and Huwinaro was just watching the robot fight. Tiny do not want to win but, he want to win Rob because Robi was very good robot. So, Tiny just go fast as he could to Rob and crash himself on Rob. Rob and Tiny both crashed. Inha grab the Yo and began to hit Yo on the air. But, United hit Inha and Yo began to hit United. United has the strongest feet, so, he kick Inha hard as he could!! Then, both Yo and Inha began to fly. But, safely, Yo landed on the Inha and live. Inha was little safe but do not has his strongest hand. Inha began to find R-190 because R-190 is weak. But, instead, he found Aibo. Child climb up the dome and fight with Huwinaro. But, Huwinaro grab and throw Child. Child do not crash but very low battery. R-190 found Child and get off the battery. There is only United(hp 70), R-190(hp 80), Yo(hp30), Gpgpgp(hp 80) and Huwinaro(hp80). So, Gpgpgp think that he would crash Yo first. Also, United think that he would crash Yo first. But, they met each other. Then United began to lay down to ground. So, Gpgpgp want to crash him. But, when Gpgpgp went to him, he kick Gpgpgp with two feet then, Gpgpgp hit Aibo and Aibo and Gpgpgp crashed(poor Aibo). But, also Yo was die at R-190. Finally, there is only 3 robots. United(United state), R-190(France) and Huwinaro(Korea of republic)!!!!! 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2015-04-09 답변내용 Tiny met Rob then began to fight, United and Yo and Inha met and fight. -Tiny met Rob and began to fight, while United, Yo, and Inha met and fought. But, Gpgpgp, R-190, Child and Huwinaro was just watching the robot fight. -But, Gpgpgp, R-190, Child and Huwinaro were just watching the robot fight. Tiny do not want to win but, he want to win Rob because Robi was very good robot. -Tiny did not want to win, but he wanted Rob to win because Rob was very a good robot. So, Tiny just go fast as he could to Rob and crash himself on Rob. -So, Tiny just went fast as he could to Rob and crashed himself on Rob. Rob and Tiny both crashed. -correct Inha grab the Yo and began to hit Yo on the air. -Inha grabbed Yo and began to hit Yo in the air. But, United hit Inha and Yo began to hit United. -But, United hit Inha and Yo began to hit United. United has the strongest feet, so, he kick Inha hard as he could!! -United has the strongest feet, so he kicked Inha as hard as he could!! Then, both Yo and Inha began to fly. -correct But, safely, Yo landed on the Inha and live. -But safely, Yo landed on Inha and lived. Inha was little safe but do not has his strongest hand. -Inha was little safe but did not have his strongest hand. Inha began to find R-190 because R-190 is weak. -Inha began to find R-190 because R-190 was weak. But, instead, he found Aibo. -But instead, he found Aibo. Child climb up the dome and fight with Huwinaro. -Child climbed up the dome and fought with Huwinaro. But, Huwinaro grab and throw Child. -But, Huwinaro grabbed and threw Child. Child do not crash but very low battery. -Child did not crash, but his battery was very low. R-190 found Child and get off the battery. -R-190 found Child and got off the battery. There is only United(hp 70), R-190(hp 80), Yo(hp30), Gpgpgp(hp 80) and Huwinaro(hp80). -There was only United with 70 HP, R-190 with 80 HP, Yo with 30 HP, Gpgpgp with 80 HP and Huwinaro with 80 HP. So, Gpgpgp think that he would crash Yo first. -So, Gpgpgp thought that he would crash Yo first. Also, United think that he would crash Yo first. -Also, United thought that he would crash Yo first. But, they met each other. -correct Then United began to lay down to ground. -Then, United began to lay down on the ground. So, Gpgpgp want to crash him. -So, Gpgpgp wanted to crash him. But, when Gpgpgp went to him, he kick Gpgpgp with two feet then, Gpgpgp hit Aibo and Aibo and Gpgpgp crashed(poor Aibo). -But, when Gpgpgp went to him, he kicked Gpgpgp with two feet then, Gpgpgp hit Aibo and Aibo and Gpgpgp crashed. Poor Aibo. But, also Yo was die at R-190. -But, also Yo died because of R-190. Finally, there is only 3 robots. -Finally, there were only three robots. United(United state), R-190(France) and Huwinaro(Korea of republic)!!!!! -They were United from the United States, R-190 from France and Huwinaro from South Korea! Comments: Hi Huwinaro! I see an improvement in this diary. You correctly used past tenses in some of your sentences. However, be parallel. You have to use past tenses with all the verbs. Still it's a good job!