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1	tommorow	2015-10-05
2	exo	2015-10-02
3	dairy	2015-09-30
4	shortest woman	2015-09-24
5	Suffer from Anemia	2015-09-23
6	festival	2015-09-22
7	Red Double Decker Buses	2015-09-21
8	Elephant	2015-07-24
9	Smurf Town in Spain	2015-07-20
10	Rudolph in New York?	2015-07-17

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회 원	박효정	작성일	2015-04-17
Weather		Feeling	Pleasure
제 목	Swim without Arms and Legs
내 용	Do you think a person with no arms and legs can swim around the world? It’s hard to believe, but a French swimmer named Philippe Croizon is planning to do it! He will swim around the world in all five continents with his friend. Do you think it’s really impossible?Well, Mr. Croizon has already swum the English Channel successfully. In fact, he had dreamed of swimming the English Channel since he was a little boy. Sadly, however, he lost all his four limbs when he was 26 due to a powerful electrical shock while changing a TV antenna. But he didn’t give up hope and decided not to give up on his goal. In 2010, he finally made his dream come true by swimming the 32 kilometer English Channel between France and the UK.Now, he has ever bigger goals.
답변자	ts0068	답변일	2015-04-17
답변내용	Do you think a person with no arms and legs can swim around the world? GOOD SENTENCE! It’s hard to believe, but a French swimmer named Philippe Croizon is planning to do it! GOOD SENTENCE! He will swim around the world in all five continents with his friend. GOOD SENTENCE! Do you think it’s really impossible? GOOD SENTENCE! Well, Mr. Croizon has already swum the English Channel successfully. GOOD SENTENCE! In fact, he had dreamed of swimming the English Channel since he was a little boy. GOOD SENTENCE! Sadly, however, he lost all his four limbs when he was 26 due to a powerful electrical shock while changing a TV antenna. GOOD SENTENCE! But he didn’t give up hope and decided not to give up on his goal. GOOD SENTENCE! In 2010, he finally made his dream come true by swimming the 32 kilometer English Channel between France and the UK. GOOD SENTENCE! Now, he has ever bigger goals. GOOD SENTENCE!