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1	tommorow	2015-10-05
2	exo	2015-10-02
3	dairy	2015-09-30
4	shortest woman	2015-09-24
5	Suffer from Anemia	2015-09-23
6	festival	2015-09-22
7	Red Double Decker Buses	2015-09-21
8	Elephant	2015-07-24
9	Smurf Town in Spain	2015-07-20
10	Rudolph in New York?	2015-07-17

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회 원	박효정	작성일	2015-04-20
Weather		Feeling	Pleasure
제 목	Water Found in Space!
내 용	In the solar system with many planets around the Sun, the Earth is the only planet where creatures live. Scientists have sent the Hubble Space Telescope to search for the possibility of other creatures on other planets.Scientists recently discovered water in stardust. That means life may exist somewhere in the universe. This is the first time to actually find H2O trapped inside stardust! John Bradley at the Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory in California looked into interplanetary dust particles found in the Earth’s stratosphere. It was incredible that he could find tiny pockets of water. That means the basic ingredient needed for life exists in space!In the laboratory, he found how the water forms in space. The star dust that contains oxygen is mostly made of silicates.
답변자	ts0068	답변일	2015-04-21
답변내용	In the solar system with many planets around the Sun, the Earth is the only planet where creatures live. GOOD SENTENCE! Scientists have sent the Hubble Space Telescope to search for the possibility of other creatures on other planets. GOOD SENTENCE! Scientists recently discovered water in stardust. GOOD SENTENCE! That means life may exist somewhere in the universe. GOOD SENTENCE! This is the first time to actually find H2O trapped inside stardust! GOOD SENTENCE! John Bradley at the Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory in California looked into interplanetary dust particles found in the Earth’s stratosphere. GOOD SENTENCE! It was incredible that he could find tiny pockets of water. GOOD SENTENCE! That means the basic ingredient needed for life exists in space! GOOD SENTENCE! In the laboratory, he found how the water forms in space. GOOD SENTENCE! The star dust that contains oxygen is mostly made of silicates. GOOD SENTENCE!