1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-04-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 STEAM festival 내 용 Today is day of science. So, in our school, we had festival named STEAM festival. STEAM is Science, Technology, Engineering, Art, Math. It is all combined education. There is 20 booths and our class had 2 booths. First is ‘speed stacks.’ ‘Speed stacks’ is also known for sports stacks. Second is ‘fly!!! Balloon helicopter.’ The balloon helicopter has so many people, the helicopter has not enough helicopter!!!! ‘Sports stacks’ is not giving it but, just do it and finish, it is more harder than ‘fly!! Balloon helicopter.’ ‘Fly!! Balloon helicopter’ is simple but fun. First, they have to connect propeller and propeller. Then, blow the balloon. Connect balloon and propeller. Throw to the air and sound of preeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and it flow to the air!!!! Then, land. It is fun because sometimes, it lands safe, but, sometimes, it do not get the balance and fail. Very funny thing is my friends. One of my friends blow the balloon and throw it to the air!!! Then!!! The helicopter is so heavy(he use big balloon) then, fly only about 5cm. And, sometimes, it land with propeller and the helicopter began to dance. It was very fun festival. 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2015-04-23 답변내용 Today is day of science. -Today is science day. So, in our school, we had festival named STEAM festival. -So, in our school, we had a festival named STEAM Festival. STEAM is Science, Technology, Engineering, Art, Math. -correct It is all combined education. -It is a combination of all subjects. There is 20 booths and our class had 2 booths. -There were 20 boots and our class had two booths. First is ‘speed stacks.’ -The first is 'Speed Stacks'. ‘Speed stacks’ is also known for sports stacks. -'Speed Stacks' is also known for sports stacks. Second is ‘fly!!! Balloon helicopter.’ -The second one is 'Fly!!! Balloon Helicopter'. The balloon helicopter has so many people, the helicopter has not enough helicopter!!!! *The balloon helicopter had so many people, but the helicopter had not enough helicopter!!! ‘Sports stacks’ is not giving it but, just do it and finish, it is more harder than ‘fly!! Balloon helicopter.’ *‘Sports stacks’ does not give it, but just do and finish it. It is harder than ‘Fly!! Balloon Helicopter.’ ‘Fly!! Balloon helicopter’ is simple but fun. -correct First, they have to connect propeller and propeller. -First, they have to connect the two propellers. Then, blow the balloon. -Then, they blow the balloon. Connect balloon and propeller. -Next, they connect the balloon and the propellers. Throw to the air and sound of preeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and it flow to the air!!!! -After that, they throw it to the air and will make a "preeee" sound until it flies to the air. Then, land. -Finally, it will land. It is fun because sometimes, it lands safe, but, sometimes, it do not get the balance and fail. -It is fun because sometimes it lands safe, but sometimes, it does not get the balance and fail. Very funny thing is my friends. -My friends made a very funny thing. One of my friends blow the balloon and throw it to the air!!! -One of my friends blew the balloon and threw it to the air. Then!!! The helicopter is so heavy(he use big balloon) then, fly only about 5cm. -Then, the helicopter was so heavy (he used a big balloon) it flew only for about 5 cm.! And, sometimes, it land with propeller and the helicopter began to dance. -After that, it landed with the propeller and the helicopter began to dance. It was very fun festival. -It was very fun festival. Comments: Hi Huwinaro! Based on your story, I could say that you really had fun in the festival. It's good to know that you participated in this kind of event to have fun and enjoyment. Thank you for sharing this with me. P.S. Some of your sentences have vague meanings. I put (*) with those sentences. I hope you check them. :)