1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-11-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Debate 2(Did Nill Armstrong go to moon?) 내 용 J(Judge):Lest's started the debate. First, Con Con: I think Nill Armstrong don't go to the Moon. Because, there is no air. But, In the tv, the flag is shake. There is no air but how the flag shake? And, there is only 1 light. That is sun. But, it's shadows is many way. Also, In the space, there is many many star. But, why there is not star? So, I think Nill Armstrong doesn't go to moon. Pro:I think Armstrong go to the moon. First, The flag is made of very thin aluminum. And, star picture is there is very dark roket. So, when in 1963, the camera is very bad. The dark thing and glowthing can't see in the bad camera. And, the moon's face's is very many rock. In the bumpy ground, shadows can scatter. So, I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. J:There is 5 judge including me. They will talk what is right. J1:I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. J2:I think Nill Armstrong doesn't go to moon. J3:I think Nill Armstrong doesn't go to moon. J4:I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. J5:I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. J: So, answer is Nill Armstrong go to the moon!!!!!!! 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2015-11-04 답변내용 J(Judge):Lest's started the debate. (correct verb 'start') >>J (Judge): Let's start the debate. First, Con (missing punctuation [colon]) >>First, Con : Con: I think Nill Armstrong don't go to the Moon. (correct spelling 'Neil'/ correct verb 'didn't/ correct letter 'moon') >>Con: I think Neil Armstrong didn't go to the moon. Because, there is no air. >> CORRECT << But, In the tv, the flag is shake. (correct choices of words) >>But, on TV, the flag shakes. There is no air but how the flag shake? (correct choices of words) >>There is no air, but how did the flag shake? And, there is only 1 light. >> CORRECT << That is sun. >> CORRECT << But, it's shadows is many way. (correct choices of words) >>But, there are too many shadows in different angles. Also, In the space, there is many many star. (correct choices of words) >>Also, in the space, there are so much stars. But, why there is not star? (correct adverb 'non') >>But, why there is no star? So, I think Nill Armstrong doesn't go to moon. (correct spelling 'Neil'/ missing article 'the'/ correct verb 'didn't) >>So, I think Neil Armstrong didn't go to the moon. Pro:I think Armstrong go to the moon. (correct verb 'went') >>Pro : I think Armstrong went to the moon. First, The flag is made of very thin aluminum. (correct letter 'the') >>First, the flag is made of very thin aluminum. And, star picture is there is very dark roket. (correct choices of words) >>And, the stars in the picture didn't appear for it is very dark even in the part of the rocket. So, when in 1963, the camera is very bad. (correct choices of words) >>In 1963, the camera is very bad, that it can't capture a perfect shot. The dark thing and glowthing can't see in the bad camera. (correct choices of words) >>The dark and glowing parts can't be seen in a low-tech camera. And, the moon's face's is very many rock. (correct choices of words) >>And, the moon's face has many rocks. In the bumpy ground, shadows can scatter. >> CORRECT << So, I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. (correct spelling 'Neil'/ correct verb 'went') >>So, I think Neil Armstrong went to the moon. J:There is 5 judge including me. (correct linking verb 'are'/ correct noun 'judges') >>J : There are 5 judges including me. They will talk what is right. (missing prepostion 'about') >>They will talk about what is right. J1:I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. (correct choices of words) >>J1 : I think Neil Armstrong went to the moon. J2:I think Nill Armstrong doesn't go to moon. (correct choices of words) >>J2 : I think Neil Armstrong didn't go to the moon. J3:I think Nill Armstrong doesn't go to moon. (correct choices of words) >>J3 : I think Neil Armstrong didn't go to the moon. J4:I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. (correct choices of words) >>J4 : I think Neil Armstrong went to the moon. J5:I think Nill Armstrong go to the moon. (correct choices of words) >J5 : I think Neil Armstrong went to the moon. J: So, answer is Nill Armstrong go to the moon!!!!!!! (correct choices of words) >>J : So, the answer is, Neil Armstrong went to the moon. *NOTE : Follow the corrections made. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Huwinaro, My only concern is that the judges should not use the line 'I think', because this sounds a personal thought. When judging, it should be based on facts, and not on personal thoughts. Try studying the Fluent level articles. If you can find the Tuesday article, it's about debate. There, you can make a study how the judge thinks. Cheers, Teacher Mea