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J(Judge): Let's start the debate. First, Good. G(Good): I think pinball is not that bad. It is because, it is not like killing or fight game. And Pinball is not cruel. So, it is just stress vigor. So, I think Pinball is good. B(Bad): I think is is bad. Becuase, maybe, Pinball must be poisoning. Many game got poisoning. Most Pinball game is Whenit goal, It give the ball. So, Many people try many time. So, It became poisoning. Thank you. J:lt is for Retort. G:You said Many pinball game give the ball. But, what about Computer Pinball? It didn't give anything. B:But, I said most. And what about you? You said It is just stress vigor. Poisoning is stress vigor? G:There is lots of computer pinball. So, Computer pinball is not poisoning. J:It is for result time. J 1. I think is is good. J 2. l think it is good. J 3. l think it is good. J; So, Good is won!
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J(Judge): Let's start the debate. >> CORRECT << >>J (Judge) : Let's start the debate. First, Good. >>First, good. G(Good): I think pinball is not that bad. >> CORRECT << >>G (Good) : I think pinball is not that bad. It is because, it is not like killing or fight game. >>It is because, it is not like killing or any fight game. And Pinball is not cruel. >>And pinball is not cruel. So, it is just stress vigor. >>So, it is just a stress vigor. So, I think Pinball is good. >>So, I think pinball is good. B(Bad): I think is is bad. >>B (Bad) : I think it is bad. Becuase, maybe, Pinball must be poisoning. >>Because, maybe, pinball must be addictive. Many game got poisoning. >>Many game can be addictive. Most Pinball game is Whenit goal, It give the ball. >>Most pinball game has a goal, it gives the ball. So, Many people try many time. >>So, many people try many times. So, It became poisoning. >>So, it became poisoning. Thank you. >> CORRECT << J:lt is for Retort. >> J : lt is for retort. G:You said Many pinball game give the ball. >>G : You said many pinball game give the ball. But, what about Computer Pinball? >>But, what about Computer Pinball? It didn't give anything. >> CORRECT << B:But, I said most. >> CORRECT << >>B : But, I said most. And what about you? >>And, what about you? You said It is just stress vigor. >>You said it is just a stress vigor. Poisoning is stress vigor? >> CORRECT << G:There is lots of computer pinball. >>G : There are lots of computer pinball. So, Computer pinball is not poisoning. >>So, computer pinball is not poisoning. J:It is for result time. >> CORRECT << >>J : It is for result time. J 1. I think is is good. >>J 1. I think its is good. J 2. l think it is good. >> CORRECT << J 3. l think it is good. >> CORRECT << J; So, Good is won! >>J : So, Good is the winner! >>J : So, Good has won! >>J : So, Good won! >>J : So, Good wins! *NOTE : Study each correction in every sentence. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Huwinaro, I encourage you to try other kinds of topics, like the kinds of diet. For example, which is better meat or fish. Try to think more of debatable issue. I will be waiting. Cheers, Teacher Mea