1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-11-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Debate4(Is Smartphone is Good or bad?) 내 용 J(Jury):We is now start the debate. It is Smartphone is good or not. G(Good):I think smartphone is good. Because in 2019, In Elematry, Midile school will use tablet PC to learn. And, there is many good thing in smartphone. Like encyclopedia. So, l think Smartphone is good. Thank you. N(Not):I think you are wrong. In 2012, one sixth grade got mad about game so, he kill his mom. And, there are many bad thing in Internet. There are lots of Killing game in Smartphone. So, I think Smartphone is bad. J:Now we will having refutation. First, G. G:You said there is lots of bad game. But, it is just stress vigor. N:Then you think Killing is just stress vigor? Life is very important. And, what about Suicde? G:Um...But, there is lots of not mad about game that have smartphone. J:Time is out. It is Examination time. .................................... J 1. I think Not is better. J 2. I think Not is better. J 3. I thinl Not is better. J: So, Not is Win! 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2015-11-13 답변내용 J(Jury):We is now start the debate. (correct modal verb 'will') >>J (Jury) : We will now start the debate. It is Smartphone is good or not. (unnecessary words) >>Is Smartphone good or not. G(Good):I think smartphone is good. >> CORRECT << Because in 2019, In Elematry, Midile school will use tablet PC to learn. (correct choices of words) >>Because in 2019, in elementary and middle school level tablet PC will be used as part of the tools in studies. And, there is many good thing in smartphone. (correct verb 'things') >>And, there are many good things in smartphone. Like encyclopedia. (missing article 'the') >>Like the encyclopedia. So, l think Smartphone is good. >> CORRECT << Thank you. >> CORRECT << N(Not):I think you are wrong. >> CORRECT << In 2012, one sixth grade got mad about game so, he kill his mom. (correct choices of words) >>In 2012, one sixth grader student got mad about a game, so he killed his mom. And, there are many bad thing in Internet. (correct choices of words) >>And, there are many bad things on the internet. There are lots of Killing game in Smartphone. (correct letter 'killing') >>There are lots of killing games in Smartphone. So, I think Smartphone is bad. >> CORRECT << J:Now we will having refutation. (correct choices of words) >>J : Now, we will have a refutation. First, G. >> ACCEPTED << G:You said there is lots of bad game. (correct choices of words) >>G : You said there are lots of bad games. But, it is just stress vigor. (missing preposition 'for') >>But, it is just for stress vigor. N:Then you think Killing is just stress vigor? (correct letter 'killing') >>N : Then you think killing is just a stress vigor? Life is very important. >> CORRECT << And, what about Suicde? (correct spelling 'suicide') >>And, what about suicide? G:Um...But, there is lots of not mad about game that have smartphone. (correct choices of words) >>G : Um...But, there are lots of people who are not mad about games on smartphone. J:Time is out. >> CORRECT << It is Examination time. >> CORRECT << .................................... J 1. I think Not is better. >> ACCEPTED << J 2. I think Not is better. >> ACCEPTED << J 3. I thinl Not is better. >> ACCEPTED << J: So, Not is Win! >>J: So, Not is the winner! ================================================================================================================================= Dear Huwinaro, I am always impressed how you translate an ordinary to a special word, like the name NOT. It's really confusing you know, but it somehow leads me to understand better of what the writing is all about. Do you consider to be an author/ writer someday? I wonder. (^_^) Cheers, Teacher Mea