1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-11-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Debate 4(Is SF movie is good or bad?) 내 용 J(Judge):Let's started the debate. First Pro. Pro:I think SF movie is ok. Because, It give many ideas. Like Iron man, many people will thought 'Is robot suit will become real?'. And, <Back to the future> is 'Is time travel is possible?'. Thank you. Con:I think it is bad. There are Many bad thing in SF movie. Because, some 7 years old child see superman. And, he want to fly. So, he jump in the top of the building. Then, he become die. So, I think SF movie is bad. J:Now it is rebuttal. Pro: you says, that SF movie is dangerous. But, It give many idea. Con:But, in sometime, it give horrible ideas. Like In the Iron man 3, the Iron man’s girlfriend Pepper go to the fire. So, people will go to the fire and jumped in. What about that? Pro:In the scientist got many dies sometimes. When to go to the new thing, than it go many sacrifice. Time is out. J 1. I think it is ok. J 2. I think it is Not ok. J 3. I think it is ok. J: So, it is ok! 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2015-11-20 답변내용 J(Judge):Let's started the debate. (correct verb 'start') >>J (Judge): Let's start the debate. First Pro. >> ACCEPTED << Pro:I think SF movie is ok. (correct spacing ' Pro: I think..') >> ACCEPTED << >>Pro: I think SF movie is ok. Because, It give many ideas. (correct letter 'it') >>Because, it gives many ideas. Like Iron man, many people will thought 'Is robot suit will become real?'. (correct verb 'think') >>Like Iron Man, many people will think 'Is robot suit will become real?'. And, <Back to the future> is 'Is time travel is possible?'. (correct proper noun 'Future'/ unnecessary linking verb 'is') >>And, <Back to the Future> is 'Is time travel possible?'. Thank you. >> CORRECT << Con:I think it is bad. (correct spacing) >> ACCEPTED << >>Con: I think it is bad. There are Many bad thing in SF movie. (correct letter 'many'/ correct noun 'things') >>There are many bad things in SF movie. Because, some 7 years old child see superman. (correct choices of words) >>Because, a 7-year-old kid watched Superman. And, he want to fly. (correct choices of words) >>He wanted to fly. So, he jump in the top of the building. (correct choices of words) >>So, he jumped on top of the building. Then, he become die. (correct choices of words) >>Sadly, the kid died. So, I think SF movie is bad. >> CORRECT << J:Now it is rebuttal. >> ACCEPTED << >>J: Now it is rebuttal. Pro: you says, that SF movie is dangerous. (correct verb 'said') >>Pro: You said, that SF movie is dangerous. But, It give many idea. (correct choices of words) >>And it gives many ideas. Con:But, in sometime, it give horrible ideas. (correct sentence construction) >>Con: But sometimes, it gives a horrible ideas. Like In the Iron man 3, the Iron man’s girlfriend Pepper go to the fire. (correct choices of words) >>Like In the movie Iron Man 3, Iron Man’s girlfriend Pepper was placed near the fire. So, people will go to the fire and jumped in. >> CORRECT << What about that? >> CORRECT << Pro:In the scientist got many dies sometimes. (correct choices of words) >>Pro: Scientists happen to die sometimes. When to go to the new thing, than it go many sacrifice. (correct choices of words) >>When doing new things, they go through a lot of sacrifices. Time is out. (correct preposition 'up') >> Time is up. J 1. I think it is ok. >> CORRECT << J 2. I think it is Not ok. >> CORRECT << J 3. I think it is ok. >> CORRECT << J: So, it is ok! >> CORRECT << *NOTE : 1) Choose the correct choices of words 2) Follow the corrections made. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Huwinaro, I wonder what SF is. Is it Sound Effects? Oh! Now, I figured it out. Science fiction! It's boring if we'll always get to watch Drama or Action kind of films. What do you think? Cheers, Teacher Mea