1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-11-26 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Debate 6(Is K-pop music is good or bad?) 내 용 J(Judge):Let's start the debate. First, good. G(good):I think song like growl is not bad. Because, everyone need hobby. And, listening music is one of the hobby. And, when it listen music, it fill calm. So, I think it is ok to listen music. J:Now, bad. B(Bad):I think music like growl is bad. Becuase, listening fast music is having bad habit. In G-dragon's crayon, it has rebuke. And, many people got distraction if they listen music like that. So, I think listening music is bad. J: Now, it’s time for rebuttal. G: You said music has bad habit. If there is bad habit, we can not listen to that music. And, for example, there is music name No, no, no by Apink. In the lysic, there is lysic like this. Don’t be sad, You are not lonely. I will be your friend, B: It is just some example of music. There is music name higher than e-sens. In the start of music, it is like this. Ah, Fu**ing, is this cigar, you Fu**ing bit**. It is very bad. J: Now, there five Jury including me. Judge will talk and what is better. J1:I think music is bad. J2:l think music is good. J3:l think music is bad. J4:I think music is bad. J5:I think music is bad. J:So, answer is Music is bad! 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2015-11-27 답변내용 J(Judge):Let's start the debate. >> ACCEPTED << First, good. >> ACCEPTED << G(good):I think song like growl is not bad. >>G (good): I think the song like growl is not bad. Because, everyone need hobby. >>Because, everyone needs a hobby. And, listening music is one of the hobby. >>And, listening to music is one of the wonderful hobbies. And, when it listen music, it fill calm. >>And, when you listen to the music, it makes you feel calm. So, I think it is ok to listen music. >>So, I think it is ok to listen to music. J:Now, bad. >> ACCEPTED << B(Bad):I think music like growl is bad. >>B(Bad):I think music like growl is bad. Becuase, listening fast music is having bad habit. >>Because, listening to fast music can bring out a bad character. In G-dragon's crayon, it has rebuke. >>In G-dragon's Crayon, it has rebuke. And, many people got distraction if they listen music like that. >>So, many people got distracted, if they listen to music like that. So, I think listening music is bad. >>So, I think listening to music is bad. J: Now, it’s time for rebuttal. >> CORRECT << G: You said music has bad habit. >>G: You said music can show one's bad character. If there is bad habit, we can not listen to that music. >>If there is a bad word in songs, we cannot listen to that music. And, for example, there is music name No, no, no by Apink. >>For example, the song entitled 'No, no, no' by Apink. In the lysic, there is lysic like this. >>In the lyrics, there is an explicit word. Don’t be sad, You are not lonely. >>Don’t be sad, you are not alone. I will be your friend, >>I will be your friend. B: It is just some example of music. >>B: It is just a line from a song. There is music name higher than e-sens. >>There is a song called Higher Than E-sens. In the start of music, it is like this. Ah, Fu**ing, is this cigar, you Fu**ing bit**. >>At the beginning of the song, it is like this, Ah, Fu**ing, is this cigar, you Fu**ing bit**. It is very bad. >> CORRECT << J: Now, there five Jury including me. >>J: Now, there are five juries including me. Judge will talk and what is better. >>The judge will now talk, and tells which one is better. J1:I think music is bad. >> CORRECT << J2:l think music is good. >> CORRECT << J3:l think music is bad. >> CORRECT << J4:I think music is bad. >> CORRECT << J5:I think music is bad. >> CORRECT << J:So, answer is Music is bad! >>J: So, the final decision is, Music is bad! *NOTE : 1) Follow each correction made in every sentence. 2) Observe the correct construction of title : WRONG : Debate 6(Is K-pop music is good or bad?) CORRECT : Debate 6 (Is K-pop music good or bad?) ================================================================================================================================= Dear Huwinaro, It is true that music plays a big role in the changing the mood of a listener. Thus, one should be careful when choosing the kind of music he/she'd listen to. Be wise in choosing the right genre. Cheers, Teacher Mea