1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2015-12-12 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 My family 내 용 My family My family are 4. Me, Dad, Mom, Brother. My name is Kim Won-ho and I am twelve years old. My birthday is January 30th. I am youngest of the family. My job is student in Sindorim elementry school. My dad’s name is Kim Hyung-min and he is forty-five years old. His birthday is April 18th. He is oldest of the family. His scholarship is like this. Oakcheon elementry school, Daedong middle school, Samsung High school and Yonseo(!!!) university. His job’s name is very long. Calpyso System Project Manager. My moms name is Kim Dae-hye and she is forty-two years old. Her birthday is September 22th. Her scholarship is like this. ? elementry school, ? middle school, ? high school and Seoul women university. She does not tell her elementry, middle and high school. Her job is home teacher. My brother is kind of tough. His birthday is April 14th. His scholarship(?) is this. Sindorim Elementry school and Sindorim middle school. He is student of Sindorim middle school. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2015-12-15 답변내용 My family My family is composed of four members. Me, Dad, Mom, and brother. My name is Kim Won-ho, and I am twelve years old. My birthday is January 30th. I am the youngest in the family. I am a student in Sindorim Elementary School. My dad’s name is Kim Hyung-min, and he is forty-five years old. His birthday is April 18th. He is the oldest in our my family. His scholastic includes, Oakcheon Elementary School, Daedong Middle School, Samsung High School and Yonseo (!!!) University. His job’s title is very long. He is the Calpyso System Project Manager. My mom's name is Kim Dae-hye, and she is forty-two years old. Her birthday is September 22nd. Her schools are, (?) elementary school, ?(?) middle school, (?) high school and Seoul Women University. She does not tell the name of her elementary, middle and highschool schools. Her job is a home teacher. My brother is a kind of tough. His birthday is April 14th. His schools are, Sindorim Elementary School and Sindorim Middle School. He is student of Sindorim Middle school. *NOTE : Study the following : - arrangement of sentences - correct choices of words - usage of punctuations - specific names ================================================================================================================================= Dear Huwinaro, It's nice to meet your family. I hope to talk to each one of them. You're in elementary level, while your brother is in middle level. I wonder where you want to study when you go, reach university level. Cheers, Teacher Mea