1 Make sandwich 2017-05-23 2 dodge ball 2017-05-11 3 My new clothes 2017-05-09 4 With sister 2017-05-04 5 Let's go Seoul 2017-05-02 6 Trip 2017-04-27 7 Gwang Reung Arboretum 2017-04-20 8 On Weekends 2017-04-18 9 On Saturday 2017-04-13 10 Facebook 2017-04-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 신여원 작성일 2016-01-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Phone 내 용 Today my phone broke. So I will buy a new phone. My phone was black. But I will have white phone. It is biger then my old phone. Today is very happy day♥♥ I want to say ti my mom."Thank you mom,I will study very much.I love you." 답변자 ts0046 답변일 2016-01-12 답변내용 Today my phone broke. So I will buy a new phone. My phone was black. >>good sentences But I will have white phone. >>I will get a white phone. NOTE: Do not use "But" to start a sentence. It is a conjunction that is better used to combine two sentences together. It is biger then my old phone. >>It is bigger than my old phone. Today is very happy day♥♥ >>Today is a very happy day. I want to say ti my mom."Thank you mom,I will study very much.I love you." >>I will say thank you and I love you to my mom and tell her that I will study more. Rapella, I'm glad that you wrote in your diary. Your mom is really nice, she is going to buy you a new phone, wow! About your diary writing, you did well. You know how to express your thoughts but you need to be careful on how you make your sentences, so keep on practicing. **Teacher Karen