1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2016-04-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My future is dangerous 내 용 I have lots of dreams for my future. I want to be a professor and writer. And also I really love design something, sometimes I think about what if I become a member of Starbucks designing team...like that. But in these days, many experts said AlphaGo will replace many jobs in the future. My father told me AlphaGo tried writing a story and it passed the first task.(It fails at last, anyway) And that means if Google upgrade AlphaGo to make better, AlphaGo can write a story like a real writer. I think someday AlphaGo or other artificial intelligence can rule humans too. And maybe it can make our future life dangerous if it replace our jobs. I just hope AlphaGo will not take all the chances from human. I don't want to give up my dream jobs because of robots. 답변자 ts0187 답변일 2016-04-05 답변내용 I have lots of dreams for my future. =correct I want to be a professor and writer. =correct And also I really love design something, sometimes I think about what if I become a member of Starbucks designing team...like that. =And also, I really love to design something. Sometimes I think about what if I became a member of Starbucks designing team... something like that. But in these days, many experts said AlphaGo will replace many jobs in the future. =But these days, many experts said that AlphaGo will replace many jobs in the future. My father told me AlphaGo tried writing a story and it passed the first task.(It fails at last, anyway) =correct And that means if Google upgrade AlphaGo to make better, AlphaGo can write a story like a real writer. =And that means if Google upgrade AlphaGo to make it better, AlphaGo can write a story just like a real writer. I think someday AlphaGo or other artificial intelligence canrule humans too. =I think someday AlphaGo or other artificial intelligence can rule humans too. And maybe it can make our future life dangerous if it replace our jobs. =And maybe it can make our future lives dangerous if it replaces our jobs. I just hope AlphaGo will not take all the chances from human. =correct I don't want to give up my dream jobs because of robots. =correct Hi Esther, Thank you for writing in your diary. Great job. Few corrections needed in your sentence construction, just be mindful of preposition usage. Have a nice day ! *T. Celine*