1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2016-04-06 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Teen's Beauty 내 용 These days, Korea's many teens are really interested in beauty and makeups. But sometimes it becomes cause problems. Korea's almost every school banned the makeups. But lots of students wear their makeup in school too. They wear BB creams or foundation, eyebrows, tint and blusher. And even some students also draw their eyelines and shadows. I'm really interested in makeup too, but I think students have to follow school rules. They break up rules for their makeups. I hope they can find teen's own beauty with no makeups and will follow school rules. 답변자 ts0187 답변일 2016-04-07 답변내용 These days, Korea's many teens are really interested in beauty and makeups. = correct = These days, Korea's teens are really interested in beauty and make ups. But sometimes it becomes cause problems. =But sometimes it can be a cause of problem. Korea's almost every school banned the makeups. = Almost all Korea's school banned make ups. But lots of students wear their makeup in school too. = But lots of students still wear make up in school. They wear BB creams or foundation, eyebrows, tint and blusher. = correct And even some students also draw their eyelines and shadows. = And some students even draw their eyelines and shadows. I'm really interested in makeup too, but I think students have to follow school rules. = correct They break up rules for their makeups. = They break rules just for their make up. I hope they can find teen's own beauty with no makeups and will follow school rules. = I hope teens can find their own beauty without make up and will follow school rules.