1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2016-04-14 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Taylor Swift's Blank space 내 용 Recently, I heard Taylor Swift's Blank space. After I heard this music, I think Taylor is really gifted singer. I like her song Shake it off too, but Blank space is better. I also heard about the reason why she made this song. It's little bit sad, but it's good because of that, this great song born. Specially, I like the last cut when Taylor met new man and smile at him. In that last cut, she looks really beautiful. And when she broke the very expensive sports car I think it's really tough. But I don't want to do like that in real. Anyway, Taylor is really good singer. Now I understand why lots of people around the world loves her. 답변자 ts0187 답변일 2016-04-18 답변내용 Recently, I heard Taylor Swift's Blank space. = correct After I heard this music, I think Taylor is really gifted singer. = After hearing this music, I think Taylor is really a gifted singer. I like her song Shake it off too, but Blank space is better. = correct I also heard about the reason why she made this song. It's little bit sad, but it's good because of that, this great song born. = I heard the reason why she made this song. It's a bit sad, but because of that, a great song was born. Specially, I like the last cut when Taylor met new man and smile at him. = I specially like the last scene where Taylor met a new man and smiled at him. In that last cut, she looks really beautiful. = She looks really beautiful in that scene. And when she broke the very expensive sports car, I think it's really tough. = correct But I don't want to do like that in real. = But I don't like doing that in real life. Anyway, Taylor is really good singer. = Anyway, Taylor is really a good singer. Now I understand why lots of people around the world loves her. = Now, I understand why lots of people around the world love her. Hi Esther, Thank you for writing in your diary again. I really appreciate it. Just be careful with the use of prepositions, other than that, you're very good! *T. Celine*