1 Make sandwich 2017-05-23 2 dodge ball 2017-05-11 3 My new clothes 2017-05-09 4 With sister 2017-05-04 5 Let's go Seoul 2017-05-02 6 Trip 2017-04-27 7 Gwang Reung Arboretum 2017-04-20 8 On Weekends 2017-04-18 9 On Saturday 2017-04-13 10 Facebook 2017-04-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 신여원 작성일 2016-04-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Saturday 내 용 On saturday I played with my friends. We went to a restaurant and ate some of beaf. And we ate some noodles. I bought one cup of cocoa. It was so delicious. We went to apartment. Wen played games and I get a penalty. But it was very funny. I want to play with my friends eveyday. 답변자 ts0046 답변일 2016-04-20 답변내용 On saturday I played with my friends. >>On Saturday, I played with my friends. We went to a restaurant and ate some of beaf. And we ate some noodles. >>We went to a restaurant and ate some beef and noodles. I bought one cup of cocoa. It was so delicious. >>good sentences We went to apartment. >>We went back to my apartment. Wen played games and I get a penalty. But it was very funny. >>We played games and I got a penalty, but it was very funny. NOTE: Do not use "But" to start a sentence. It is a conjunction that is better used to combine two sentences. I want to play with my friends eveyday. >>I want to play with my friends everyday. Rapella, Hi!!! I want to meet my friends too! I miss them, we haven't seen each other for a long time. Anyway, great job for making lots of good sentences today in your diary, keep it up! There are still some corrections, so study them. In that way, you can make better sentences next time. **Teacher Karen