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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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I really love yogurts. Like plain yogurt, fruits yogurt, frozen yogurt, and yogurt with toppings like cereals or Oreos. When I visit my aunt's house in USA, I really surprised. They have various kinds of yogurts! Like M&M yogurt, pinacolada flavor yogurt, lime yogurt and more. I really enjoy Froyo in USA, but unfortunately, I think Korea don't have Froyo. In Korea, VIyotte is my favorite. It's really simple but delicious. It's also good as a meal for a breakfast. They have plain yogurt with toppings such as chocolate balls, chocolate rings and mixed berry syrups.
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I really love yogurts. = correct Like plain yogurt, fruits yogurt, frozen yogurt, and yogurt with toppings like cereals or Oreos. = Like plain yogurt, fruits, frozen and with toppings like cereals or Oreos. When I visit my aunt's house in USA, I really surprised. = When I visited my aunt¡¯s house in USA, I was really surprised. They have various kinds of yogurts! = correct Like M&M yogurt, pinacolada flavor yogurt, lime yogurt and more. = Like M & M, pincolada, lime, and more. I really enjoy Froyo in USA, but unfortunately, I think Korea don't have Froyo. = I really enjoyed Froyo in USA, unfortunately, I think Korea doesn¡¯t have Froyo. In Korea, VIyotte is my favorite. = correct It's really simple but delicious. = correct It's also good as a meal for a breakfast. = It¡¯s also a good meal for breakfast. They have plain yogurt with toppings such as chocolate balls, chocolate rings and mixed berry syrups. = correct Hi Esther, Thank for writing in your diary again. You did a good job!. There's only very few corrections. Just continue writing. *T. Celine*
