1 Autumn, relieving myself 2016-09-29 2 OIL 2016-05-03 3 The squrim of North Korea. What will be the result? 2016-03-22 4 Autumn; the season for students 2015-09-30 5 Sinju Singers Big Concert 2015-08-26 6 Economy Shaken by China's decrease 2015-08-24 7 North Korea's serious attack 2015-08-21 8 Humanity, the entrance of the peaceful life 2015-08-19 9 Abe's notorious behaviors 2015-08-14 10 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change 2015-08-07 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 현동준 작성일 2016-09-29 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Autumn, relieving myself 내 용 The season that I like the most came back... In some points I am very glad to meet this season ''AUTUMN'' but I can look many faults and bad experiences that I should not repeat. This anguish and agony season makes me to think about my life during this year a lot. I had many faults that I should not do to friends, parents, cousins and family members. Rememberence and change should come next year, as I will become middle school second grader. I hope that I can become a better student that I can boast by myself. God blesses me and god follow me for my happiness. I would like to make better scores and results in sports matches between other classes. I really have to try to read more books than before. It should be and it is my duty to read books. I have to make more effort to myself and for my futre too. The reason why I like autumn the most is that it makes me calm down. Cool wind and surroundings help me to stable myself. I do appreciate to read some books related to travel or poetry. Why don't you fall into the deep sweet fall? 답변자 ts0172 답변일 2016-10-03 답변내용 The season that I like the most came back. = Correct. In some points I am very glad to meet this season ''AUTUMN'' but I can look many faults and bad experiences that I should not repeat. = In some points, I am very glad to meet this season "Autumn", but I can see lots of faults and bad experiences that I should not repeat. This anguish and agony season makes me to think about my life during this year a lot. = This anguish and agony season makes me want to think about my life during this year a lot. I had many faults that I should not do to friends, parents, cousins and family members. = Correct. Rememberence and change should come next year, as I will become middle school second grader. = Remembrances and change should come next year, as I will become middle school second grader. I hope that I can become a better student that I can boast by myself. = I hope that I can become a better student where in I can boast myself. God blesses me and god follow me for my happiness. = God blesses me and God follow me for my happiness. I would like to make better scores and results in sports matches between other classes. = Correct. I really have to try to read more books than before. = Correct. It should be and it is my duty to read books. = Correct. I have to make more effort to myself and for my futre too. = I have to make more effort for myself and for my future, too. The reason why I like autumn the most is that it makes me calm down. = Correct. Cool wind and surroundings help me to stable myself = Cool wind and surroundings help me to stable myself. I do appreciate to read some books related to travel or poetry. Why don't you fall into the deep sweet fall? = I do appreciate books related to travel or poetry. Why don't you fall into the deep sweet fall? The fact that you realized your mistakes and you're humble enough to admit it, that's already an accomplishment that you should be proud of. I hope, whatever your heart desires, you'll be more successful and happier. Continue improving yourself and don't lose focus. Take advantage of the season to unwind and reminisce the past, but don't dwell too much in your past because today is the most important as well as your future. Cheers!