1 restaurant 2019-03-01 2 Before school project 2019-02-27 3 buying laptop 2019-02-18 4 Watching movie 2019-02-08 5 Going school back 2019-01-28 6 Sewead soup ramen 2019-01-25 7 Watching Soccer 2019-01-23 8 Playing computer games 2019-01-21 9 Science academy 2019-01-18 10 Reading a book 2019-01-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이채원 작성일 2016-10-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 A little princess " book 내 용 I read a book "A little princess" in my home. It was reading time and I have to read a book and I found a book in the library. I borrow this book and started to read. The story was Seru crue came to England with her father soldier Crue and entrance to a Minchin's school. However Minchin was very greedy teacher so when soldier Crue die, she get all back of Seru and Seru lives like a bagger. However, soldier Crue's friend Carisford came to England and starts to fing Seru. So she goes to him and live together. Minchin teacher thaught very bad because she lose lot's of money that can get from Mr. carisford. I thought I have to live kindly to anyone. 답변자 ts0139 답변일 2016-10-24 답변내용 I read a book "A little princess" in my home. >> I read a book called "A Little Princess" at home. It was reading time and I have to read a book and I found a book in the library. >> It was reading time at home and I have to read at least one book. I found this book at the library. I borrow this book and started to read. >> I only borrowed this book and started reading. The story was Seru crue came to England with her father soldier Crue and entrance to a Minchin's school. >> The story was about Sara Crewe who has a soldier father. They traveled to England and she enrolled to Miss Minchin's school. However Minchin was very greedy teacher so when soldier Crue die, she get all back of Seru and Seru lives like a bagger. >> However Miss Minchin was a greedy person, when Sara's father died she made Sara live like a beggar. However, soldier Crue's friend Carisford came to England and starts to fing Seru. >> Ralph Crewe, Sara's father has a friend named Mr. Carrisford, he came to England and started looking for Sara. So she goes to him and live together. >> Later on, he found Sara and they live together. Minchin teacher thaught very bad because she lose lot's of money that can get from Mr. carisford. >> Miss Minchin was punished for the bad things she did to Sara and everything she had was taken away. I thought I have to live kindly to anyone. >> What I learned from this story is to be always kind. Be kind to everyone at all times. ** Teacher's Note ** Hello Ernest^^ That was really interesting, I grew up watching A Little Princess. You should see the animation it was really heartbreaking. I used to hate Miss Minchin when I was young, because of what she did to Sara. But fortunately it was a happy ending story. Anyway, I have some advice for you with regards to your writing. First of all you did well as always. I just want you to study tenses (example past, present and future), if you are writing about the things that already happened write them in past tense and then same if it's present and future. Another thing is your connectors (example and, but, then, however), it is very important to learn how to use connectors properly especially when you are constructing a paragraph. Just be mindful of these and we'll see your next diary. Fighting! Sincerely, T. Michelle ^^