1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2016-11-08 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My precious dolls 내 용 I have a really cute doll. He is a Border Collie baby so he has a black and white furs and long tail. Most of his fur is black, so I called him 'Kkamkkam'. 'Kkamkkam' means dark in Korean. My brother brought me this doll when he went to COEX shopping mall because my midterm is finished. My brother knows me really well, so I think he also knows how I feel bad in midterm season. I always thankful to my brother. He always take great care of me. He also knows I love animal dolls. From that day, 'KkamKkam' in on my bed, sleeping right next to me. I really love my brother and 'KkamKkam'. 답변자 ts0187 답변일 2016-11-09 답변내용 I have a really cute doll. =Correct. He is a Border Collie baby so he has a black and white furs and long tail. =He is a Border Collie baby so he has a black and white fur and long tail. Most of his fur is black, so I called him 'Kkamkkam'. =Correct. 'Kkamkkam' means dark in Korean. =Correct. My brother brought me this doll =My brother bought me this doll when he went to COEX shopping mall because my midterm is finished. =Correct. My brother knows me really well, so I think =My brother knows me really well. he also knows how I feel bad in midterm season. =That's why I think he also knows how bad I feel during the midterm season. I always thankful to my brother. =I am always thankful to my brother. He always take great care of me. =Correct. He also knows I love animal dolls. =Correct. From that day, 'KkamKkam' in on my bed, sleeping right next to me. =From that day, 'KkamKkam' has been on my bed, sleeping right next to me. I really love my brother and 'KkamKkam'. =Correct. Great job Esther! First thank you for making such a lengthy diary, Esther. You did a wonderful job! There were mistakes but it didn't change the meaning of what your trying to express. Study the corrections made and be careful not to repeat them again. I hope I can see 'Kkam Kkam' someday! I bet that your doll really looks great, especially on the thought that it is from your brother. Its nice to hear that you have such a wonderful relationship with your brother and I hope that it will continue until you both grow older. It kind of saddens me that this might be your last diary because your period is about to end, but I know you will continue to be a great student. Keep on learning! See you later. Best regards, T. Deborah. ^^