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Debate competition
2019-04-12
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
2019-03-14
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I want more time
2019-03-08
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Be thankful for all i've got now
2018-08-03
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my own credit card
2018-07-31
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After the field trip
2017-05-17
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Field trip
2017-05-16
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I really love animation 'Peanuts'. Specially, my favorite character is Snoopy. Snoopy is just a white cute dog who have a yellow bird friend. He just look like actual dog, but he's special because he is writing stories with his typewriter on his house. All those features makes him more special. Once when Baskinrobbins collaborated with snoopy, I was so happy, so I ate lots of their icecreams and their beverages. Because of that, I can get a really adorable Snoopy and Woodstack cup holder. I want to use but I can't because they are so cute. I think I'll keep it forever. If I can, I really want to get a Snoopy and Woodstack dolls.
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I really love animation 'Peanuts'. =I really love the animation 'Peanuts'. Specially, my favorite character is Snoopy. =Specially, my favorite character Snoopy. Snoopy is just a white cute dog who have a yellow bird friend. =Correct. He just look like actual dog, but he's special =He just looks like a normal dog, but he's special because he is writing stories with his typewriter on his house. =Correct. All those features makes him more special. =Correct. Once when Baskinrobbins collaborated with snoopy, =Once, when Baskinrobbins collaborated with snoopy, I was so happy, so I ate lots of their icecreams and their beverages. =I was so happy, so I ate a lot of their ice creams and drink their beverages. Because of that, I can get a really adorable =Because of that, I got to have Snoopy and Woodstack cup holder. =adorable Snoopy and Woodstack cup holder. I want to use but I can't because they are so cute. =Correct :) I think I'll keep it forever. =Correct. If I can, I really want to get a Snoopy and Woodstack dolls. =Correct. Amazing night Esther! Wow you always amaze me with your diaries! Its nice to hear from you about this Snoopy and his friends. I think their cute just like you :) I do hope you can get the dolls soon. With regards to your writing skills it was almost okay, minor mistakes were noted but they can be easily corrected and they didn't change the meaning of the sentence. Continue improving because I can see a good future for you. Thank you for being such a nice student! See you tomorrow. Take a good rest for now. Have a good night! Best regards, T. Deborah. ^^