1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2017-02-06 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Pokemon Go 내 용 Pokémon Go is allowed in Korea too. Lots of Koreans really enjoying catch some Pokémons. But I don't understand why people are addicted to that game. I'm not a big fan of Pokémon or other Japanese animations, so maybe that's why I can't find interest in that game. I tried it once, and it makes me tired soon and I think it's boring. It's just like searching for Pokémons and catching them with their phones and on and on and on. Some of my friends played this game and they said, it's really stressed out when they're searching for Pokémons but they found nothing or just a one or two. I like their adorable characters, but their games are not fits for me. 답변자 ts0154 답변일 2017-02-08 답변내용 Pokémon Go is allowed in Korea too. >>Very good introduction Lots of Koreans really enjoying catch some Pokémons. >>Lots of Koreans are really enjoying to catch some Pokémons. But I don't understand why people are addicted to that game. >>Nice sentence construction. I'm not a big fan of Pokémon or other Japanese animations, o maybe that's why I can't find interest in that game. >>I'm not a big fan of Pokémon or other Japanese animations. >>Maybe that's why I don't find any interest about that game. I tried it once, and it makes me tired soon and I think it's boring. >>I tried it once, and it makes me tired, And soon I thought it's boring. It's just like searching for Pokémons and catching them with their phones and on and on and on. >>It's just like searching for Pokémons and catching them with their phones repeatedly. Some of my friends played this game and they said, it's really stressed out when they're searching for Pokémons but they found nothing or just a one or two. >>Some of my friends played this game and they said "it's really stressed out whenever they're searching for it, but they just found nothing or just a one or two. I like their adorable characters, but their games are not fits for me. >>I like their adorable characters, but the game doesn't fit for me. ................................................................................................................................................................................................... Hi Esther, Wow, thank you for writing your first diary. I am glad that you made a good diary. Actually, I also tried Pokémon Go but it only lasted for one week because, it is boring and just a waste of time. I liked to play Pokémon in Nintendo, when I was younger. But I guess, this game's popularity is becoming less. Let's hope that they will enjoy it. On the other hand, I noticed on how you constructed the content of your diary is like sentence by sentence. In making a diary, it should be in paragraph form (which means it is continuous like on what I am doing). And also division of sentences should be in right order. Use conjunctions to divide or continue a sentence. I hope you will create a better diary with my advices. Once again, thank you. Teacher Francis